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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person liza
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love you! I absolutetly love your stories. The story was written very good and paced well. This chapter was great, I liked Naruto's reaction to meeting his new teamates. Anko ROCKS! she is a scary person, and to now have her as a teacher... oh... poor naruto. Yes a little emotional but it fit. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Are you going to update Silent Observer one day? Its a very good story!

person MasterLenx
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Whines* nothing happened!! Oh well... it was still good and VERY informative! lol... well, I hope you update soon, cause I am SERIOUSLY looking forward to the next chapter my great one! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOOHOOOO!!!! ^_^

Sincerely,

MasterLenx
person Ladybug452000
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fantastic....ur not going to make Naruto a wussy are you? Love your story so far looking for the next update!!! Ladybug452000@Gmail. feel free to e-mail me and annoy me, I like it when people annoy me :)
person Nyuchan
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love you.

Good chapter *sighs* MORE! :D
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god, that was great! i, so, wouldn't want to be in naruto's shoes right now. he's gonna have a hell of a time with anko as his teacher. i like how you picked raido as the other team member. nobody ever really pays any attention to him in fanfics and now you'll get to have free reign over his personality and everything. anyway, looking foward to your next update.
person HellKat
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that was a brilliant chapter, the emotional stuff was just right. It even made me upset, Naruto's reaction was spot on. And at the end, with Anko, just priceless. Loved this chapter, and I'm looking forwards to the next one, please make it soon, there isn't that many good stories around at the moment. So hope to see you soon, ja ne.
person LonelyDove89
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you put the story together so well..cant wait 4 the whole thing to be finished!! ^_^
person haruka hikari
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVEEE YOUUUUU....this is the first time i ever review to any of fanfics that i have read...i read almost every naruto fics that u wrote...n i'm a die hard fan of itanaru..can't believe there actually sumone who could make itanaru a posssible thing..i mean u made ita not so OOC...especially in ur other fic winter release...i kinda luv how you make naruto char looks like..n about all those anbu...cool...ur one of my fav author...i juz read one of ur stories...n i got stuck...hahaha...thanx anyway for writing this kinda story...i'll wait 4 ur update...jya..^_^
person Mrs Heero Yuy
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Saying that I like this idea for a fic is an understatement. I Love it. Finally Iruka has been made as a strong Ninja; I've read so many fics where he is weak and ends up dying and stuff. Also, I like how naruto's thoughts when deciding which path to take are very clear and gives him credit for his mental abilities. I can't wait to read the next chapter; please post it soon.
person Broken
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW! THis is awesome!! I can hardly wait to read what's next!! I can barely... if at all find the words for my excitment to this story! Very awesome work! I love you writing style too! Wow! Keep the chapters coming!