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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person HellKat
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update real soon, I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. Even though I'm a hardcore Sasuke/Naruto pairing, I am getting into Itachi/Naruto pairings. Anyway, will be waiting for the next chapter.
person Lilith
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-drool- you make me want to beg for more. i can't wait to see what mask naruto turns out to have and i cannot wait for more of this story! it is beautiful and filled with true emotions. Love it! Do you have a mailing list?
lilithwolf@excite.com
person Dark Toy
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I belive (firmly) that Naruto will fall from his chair!!!!

Something like:

silence...

silence...

snikers...

scream: WTF??????????????

fall...

silence...

silence...

more snikers...

Laughing out loud...

I'll be waiting for more!
person AnA La Pana83
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I'm so glad Naruto was received so well! He's gonna bug out in the next chap i'm sure when he sees who it is. Itachi as his captain...interesting indeed!
person LonelyDove
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! u updated...i love this story so far
person Sir Magus
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story god my favorites list is getting so full i mean i have like 30 naruto stories alone on it an now this one is one it. pls update soon!!!!!!!!!!
person Awyr
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I hate those Naruto fanfics that has Naruto just be a badass holding back, instead of getting better. I anticipate when you bring Kakashi into this.
person tortilla lady
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hate cliffhangers!!!! will kakashi ever find out about naruto becoming anbu? was he charged to protect naruto too or is he more like the other villagers?? please update soon!!! i really really love this story and i want to see it continued!!
person Lilith
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more... please? -give you puppy eyes- Simply wonderful. I love the plot twists especially with Iruka and Naruto deciding to join the ANBU... I can't wait to see him grow and what mask he takes...
lilithwolf@excite.com
person MasterLenx
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O... That was so cool. I've never read a story like this before. People always say that the ANBU is a group anyone can get into you know? But you make them seem really special... (Which makes me feel special for some reason! ^_^) I'm like so excited... *must feel like Naruto does!* YAY!! Oh my gosh! lol... it's just so great! I'm gonna READ ALL OF YOUR STORIES NOW! Also, I LOVE THE PAIRINGS!! I've read very few GOOD Itachi/Naruto fanfics. *besides Changes.. or something like that by Agni. - wanna read a great story? Read that!* but yep... your story has given me something to look forward. Also, like... *can you tell me what Naruto's final mask is gonna be? Or his permanent one? I LOVE HYOO!!! He has such a great personality. Can you draw a pic of him and send it to me?* If you want to... ANYWAY... GREAT JOB!! UPDATE SOON KOI! Also, this is the FIRST story I've read where Iruka is an ANBU member. I'm actually working on a story like that myself. But it's centered on Iru's pov... it's a Kakashi/Iruka... Yep, I LOVE THAT PAIRING! And anyway... it's really sad, but loving, lot's of sex... and yep! ^_^ update soon love!