rate_review Reviews

I love This Story PLEASE PLEASE Update soon!

yes i think u should continue....i likes i likes hehe

Me like........now...........plz get typing.............plz?! .......plz? ~pouts + lip quiver~ plz?

Wow, this is simply amazing. *___* I seriously teared up while reading the second chapter. That nurse deserves a good bitch slapping.

Pleeeeeeeeeeeease write more. -begbeg-

I liked it i didn't think i would from the description, there are a few errors that could befixed with betaing such at using the word "will" when the word "should" is correct, and a few acqwardly phrased areas. But the overall plot was fairly good, I do hope (and it seems to be set up that way) that Naruto chooses ANBU.

If you need a proof-reader feel free to email me, I'm kind of buzy with school and work, but it wouldn't take too long the chapters aren't epic after all (you know the crazy long chapters...) I could get them done in a reasonable length of time.

It was interesting.

i like this story so far please keep going

Ah, Cepheus. Always a pleasure to read your work. You have a wonderful, simple style of writing that is informative and draws the reader into your world.

One theme I've noticed here definitely is the fact that Naruto seems to be avoiding his bitterness over how the village treats him, and I am very pleased with how you wrote his reaction. It's very him. He smiles when he's hurting.

Excellente!

I look forward to your next chapter.

Man, that anbu captain moves fast. I wasn't expecting him to ask so soon. But if it helps get naru to itachi faster then I'm all for it. ^_^ j/k. I appreciate sakura's thoughtfulness towards naruto. it sure would've made made him feel a hella lot worse if she did bring a gift for sasuke. Anyway, nice chapter. I can't wait to hear naruto's decision. (Even though I'm pretty sure I know what he's going to pick) I just wanna know what gonna give him the push he needs to decide. See ya next time!

~Devious

That was good!!!
I can't wait to see what he will decied!!
Most likely it would be ANBU but that would be interesting to read!!

Update soon

Good story please update soon