rate_review Reviews

Ah this story is amazing and so much fun to read. I had a great time catching up on the chapters i missed. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep me updated XD.

Wow that was really fantastic!!!! I totally love this story!!!!! It's really my favorite at the moment!!!! I really liked the way you discribed the handsighns and what they mean!!! And I'm so happy that there is something NAruto is a genius at!!!! And I love Hyoo he is so sweet how he looks after our 'Trainee' ^^ Please give us mores soon!!!!

This is such an amazing story.

I just finished my first run through this story. I have to say, ItaNaru is my favorite pairing and I very much enjoyed your work. I will now have to go and read your other offerings. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I am loving this story so far. A lot of authors do not take the time to really detail the training processes or how a jutsu might work. I realize that it is a small detail to appreciate, but it gives the story more of a sense of realism. I had one or two questions though. How old are the characters in this storyline and how long are you intending this story to be? I ask these two questions because this story is listed as Ita/Naru, Gen/Rai, and Iru/Kaka/Iru, but there has been no real foreshadowing of feelings other than annoyance from Iruka and pride from several of the characters toward Naruto and this story is already sixteen (big) chapters long.

I like the fact that the characters are starting to heal as people and am especially interested in seeing how Sasuke will grow although that might be a separate story. Once again not a lot of authors take the time to really develop the characters. My only real criticism is that you seriously need a beta. The spelling errors, mistypes, and complete misuse of some words is very distracting from an otherwise awesome story. I am willing to help of you can find no one else that wants the position. :^)

Wow this story is just ... wow!!!! It is absoloutly fantastic!!!!! I just read the whole story and I think it is the most different story I've ever read!!!! I really love the way you write and that you discribe his training in so much details!!!! Thats just great I have never seen any author do it this perfectly and I absoloutly love it!!!! And there is so much story!!!! Something I sometimes miss this in the Naruto fandome!!! I this is my favorite story at the moment so I really hope to hear from you soon!!!!! I so can't wait so Narutos and Gaaras meeting!!! And I can't wait to see what he will learn next!!!! And I totally adore Hyoo!!!!!! He is so damn HOT!!!! And mysterious!!!! In the first chappy I really that that he is Itachi he has the same air around him^^ It's just fantastic how mature Naruto gets in such a sort time!!! I really love to see his development in story!!!! But Iruka beeing an ANBU really surprised me he seems so meek all the time!!! He really is an great actor!!!! But I still wonder when the loving of all the pairings will start!!!! But still I beg you to continue with your wonderfull plot!!!! I hate storys that only have smutt and no story!!!! So plaese take your sweet time!!!! I just aboutly love this unbelivebale story!!!! I really think I have too few superlatives to discribe this story!!!! I just really LOVE it!!!! So pretty please update soon!!!!! I need my next fix!!!!!

I was glad to see this updated. I don't frequent AFF as much as I used to, though I do have this story linked on my main webpage rec journal and check it occasionally. It's so rare for me to find any ItaNaru stories that draw me in and entertain me. I'm so glad to see this one isn't dropped. It's a wonderful story and as long as you continue to update it, I will continue to read it :D

This entire story is brilliant and so very detailed. I can't wait for you to update again!

I am beyond excited to see this updated. I had feared you'd given up on it!

Great moving forward momentum on the plot. I'm not surprised Gaara sensed Naruto. It's like the two have a homing beacon on each other lol

I hope for more soon!

I could hug you right now! Welcome back & awesome new chapt