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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person SuteShia
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just reviewing because you haven't updated and I felt you needed to know I still check this fanfiction almost everyday to see if it updated. I just adore it. Hoping you will come back and if poor health, lack of computer or such is involved atleast you know you still have loyal fans. Wishing you well.
person jordan
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey love the story and really hope you plan to update soon
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I love all your stories and I've been waiting for updates ^.^. It was awesome, happy to know he wasnt bad after all :D
person spikemyangel
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing chapter, as always. the fight with Kei was heartbreaking, and then a smack in the face when it was revealed to be a test. i nearly never figure things out before they happen - i like surprises - so i was totally shocked by the whole thing ^_^ and i'm also glad that the sucky restraining was a part of the plot, and not bad writing, as i assumed when i read it. i look forward to the next chapter. i'm sure the exams will be anything but boring ^_-
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay an update!! i really like this story and i can't wait to see what will happen. Thank you for not making kei a traitor. it will be nice to see more of thier interactions. when should we see more itanaru? how will naruto react when he sees sasuke again? the timeline sounds good and it makes sense, to me at least.
person gwyllion
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG YAY!!!! I can't believe you updated! *flails* I knew...just knew it had to be a test. It was perfect! This update seriously made my night. Thank you! Can't wait to read more! :D
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG

YOU UPDATED!!!!

*happy dances*

I loved the test. Cruel but necessary. It was great, well written. Naruto did really well. I can't wait for more!
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story,I just read it from the begining to the very end, and I got to say my eyes and head hurt... *grin*(from staring at the screen for so long) I hope there will be more as soon as possible, though the 'things' between Naruto and Itachi are moving so agonizingly slow- it sometimes makes me wonder if this story will be an ItaNaru one... (this isn't a flame, I wanted you to know that- I merely wanted to share my impressions and feelings.. :3 ) but, on the other side, that doesn't mean you should hury with everything, all of this - Naruto's training and his mental and physical growing- are a part of the story, and things shouldn't be rushed, so I'm kind of glad you made the story this long, but, you know- beeing a fan of this pairing and all- I just can't wait to see more... 'action'...heh...
But it would be really odd if they (Naruto and Itachi) would start having feelings for each other or something like that when Naruto is this young... I mean, Itachi would appear something like a paedophile... (at least to me,heh) Before I confuse you even more with my stupid 'speech', I wanted to say that the story is good as it is, and it's nice that you made it so slow, I just hope the waiting will be 'paid off' later... I'm looking forward to some... hmm... steamy chapters in the future... Ja!
person qwerty
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so surprised and happy to see this updated!
Great chapter! Keep going!
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I wish you updated more often but with chapters that long, its hard to complain. Oh well keep up the work! Usually I can kinda tell where a story is going but not this one! And Kei! OMG *squeals* update soon k? Ja ne!