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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

person DemonicKitsune-chan
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS SO KICK ASS! xD I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! xD
THIS STORY IS SO KICK ASS! I can't wait to see the relationship between Itachi and Naruto Evolve xD
Update Soon! BETTER YET, UPDATE NOW! xD
D.K.-chan
person shadowphoenix143
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazingly addicting! I couldn't stop reading once I started! Your writing is so descriptive, it makes it easy to get lost in your words. I look forward to reading more! Do you happen to send out emails when you update? If you do, could you let me know also? I'd appreciate it! :)
shadowphoenix143@comcast.net
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story, can't wait to see where you take this, along with your other fics. Do you think that you could send me an email with the web address when you add to them to let me know? my email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
person Winini
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Gwyllion
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must apologize for reviewing so late. I had to run back and re-read it's entirety to get into the story more. And I must tell you again how much I enjoyed this story!!! Thank you so much for this update! *flails* It's one of my all time fav and I had thought it was abandoned since it stopped for a while. Boy, was I glad I still had this bookmarked. This last chapter had me LOLing in the beginning with Naruto waking up with his night cap still on. It was absolutely adorable!! And I was so shocked at the last part!!! OMG! Sweet little, clumsy Kei?! D8 There's a small little tug in my heart, which made me hope that this was just a test for Naruto's sake, but I should assume and give it too much hope either.
I'm so happy that Sasuke is feeling satisfied with his current role as a teacher, even though he still holds some dark thoughts. But Naruto is always near his thoughts to, which still makes me know that he will stay loyal to his blondie. Once again, thank you so much for this update! Have you ever been in Yaoi!Gallery.net by any chance? I would totally recommend you to submit your awesome works there. The fans will eat it up. If you don't mind, I will be pimping this story out in my journal. Please keep up the wonderful work! I look forward to more! :D
person Ikippiki
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great chapter! Althought you left us with a cliffie... meanie. I hope Kei is not really bad but it's Naruto's test for Anbu! I kinda liked him... Well even if he is "bad" I'm sure Naru will change him lol.
Please write more the more quickly possible!!
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG...you updated! And Kei, a traitor? Is he part of the test or really a betrayer?
person kylie
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you. thank you. thank you. thank you. thank you. thank you.
person a kitsunes light
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! POor naruto!!! I never expected that!!!
But I also LOVED this new chapter!!! Thank you sooo much for writing it!!! I hope you are able to update soon again!!!! I lo ve this story!!!!!
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love you so much for continuing this. The ending of the chapter had me screaming in frustration, "What will happen next!" I really look forward to the next chapter. You are one of my heroes for this story. Happy Writing.

~Daydreamer