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for Colourless Vanity

by Cepheus

schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story! I like the fact that you don't skip over the training and that the characters don't just hop into bed with each other, not that a little PWP isn't good on occasion. Plus, an "evil" Iruka is too hilarious for words! Hope you keep this wonderful story going and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
person firehedgehog
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very kewl
person animelover
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure I've posted a review already, but just in case I didn't, here's my two cents worth: THIS STORY IS COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY OFF THE HOOK!!! And I mean that sincerely! It'll be interesting to see where you put the lemons, but this fic is awesome so far and (I know you can't see it)I'm on knees begging for a new chappie soon. Question, will any of Naruto's friends figure out he's in ANBU? I would think Shikamaru or Neji;--the resident geniouses--would eventually. Sasuke won't cause he has his own issues.

Well, adios amigo! XOXO
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOCVE IT! I NEED MOER OF IT!
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the chapter. I love Naruto's latest task. Reminds me of my boyfriend's house with all those weapons. Swords, guns, and knives. Heh. Iruka took Kakashi's icha icha. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Word_Slave
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!
More please?
Slave
person animelover
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yawn!! Ok, I want you to know I just spent the entire evening reading this fic and LOVED IT!!!! Will you marry me? Kidding! Anyway, my fave part was when Iruke humiliates Kakashi .. priceless! And I also enjoyed watching Naruto blossom into a real person who feels loved and appreciated, oh and gets the training he deserves. I've read doujinshi where Naruto is an ANBU and wondered how that happened. Now I know.

Well, you are definitely in my top 5 fave authors on this site. Thanks for letting us nonjoining lurkers review your work. Can't wait to see wait happens next.

See ya!
person Seld
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, creepy. I made a guess at what weapon he would pick at the beginning of the chapter...and I was right. :D

Great chapter as usual, it's so wonderful to have a story that acknowledges the idea that Naruto wasn't really taught that well at the academy. Additionally, this is about the only story from which I can tolerate Kakashi/Iruka, because you tie in the fact that every time they've ever had canon interaction Kakashi has humiliated Iruka. THANK YOU.
person Damp
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEP!! Naruto got a weapon of his choice! YAY! And I absolutely love the choice he made, so original. I couldn't even remember if I'd even remember if I'd seen that weapon or not in the series.

-Damp *I guess not!!*
person qwerty
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I was wondering what kind of weapon Naruto would pick up. Interesting choice.
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