rate_review Reviews

*bounces* You updated! OMG...you have no idea how much I was looking forward to this. It's an odd but fitting taste in weapons for Naru-chan.

The only helpful hint I have for you is to watch your pacing. It does seem a little rushed in places, like you're trying to get to one point sooner. It didn't detract at all from the chapter but is something you might want to watch out for.

*grins* I LOVE what Iruka did to Kakashi. TRUE JUSTICE!!! lololol!!!

I actually went to Photobucket.com to see what Naruto's weapon looks like. I think that's interesting & unique for him.

You go Iruka. Kakashi definitely deserved it, not just because of how annoying he's been but because of how poorly he's treated Naruto. Okay maybe not poorly but come on he only trained Sasuke when he also knew how to use the Rasengan. Finally someone put him on his place.

that was such a great story!! i loved it please post the next chapter soon. :)

YAY!!! I really like this so far ^_^ I hope you update soon!

Oh... and I was wondering... didn't you used to have a story called
Poisoned Lullaby??

~*~VIVA*LA*SMUT~*~

I hope that you are aware of the masterpiece you have created here. This is actually a real full blown story! With mood and feeling and character development and suspense and oh so much more. This is not just yaoi thrown around like confetti where the characters are flamboyantly gay and pubescent. I can't believe what a great story this is, it's like...at the end of my day i can't wait to get home settle down with my green tea and read this aha. But one problem.... where's the rest! I want more.. keep it coming!
I simply can't wait to see a Naruto and Itachi romance starting. Were getting there soon right?

Update soon please!

Great story I love it!

thank you! yes i love it! you are amazing! i love the detail that you go into with the traiing... we really get to feel naruto's pain! the whole iruka/kakashi thing is adorable as well... i can just see naruto sneeking into kakashi's room at night in his anbu uniform to threaten kakashi into being a good boyfriend to iruka! so cute! naruto is all protective... speaking of naruto... I can't wait for he itachi to get together! this fic is amazing, thank you so much! *HUG* i love you!!!!! please write more soon! *kiss*

p.s.

whoever left you that review about the japanese is stupid and should be ignored! i like it when you use japanese (even if it isn't perfect... which i wouldn't be able to tell anyways... ^_^) and i think it adds to the story. that kid sounds like a snob and you should definately not listen to her!!! *HUG* i think the story is perfect the way it is and stupid flames like that are just... STUPID! ahhh! i love you! XD