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for This can't be happening!

by nekochannya

person Tigoxgirl
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and would love to read more... Are you alright? Or have you lost inspiration for this story? It would mean a lot to me if you finished the story or gave a bulleted list of major events that were to happen. I hope this review finds you well.... Take care and thank you for the wonderful story you have given.
person Redisroses
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story. Would love to be able to read more of it.
person kai
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
its been a super long time since ive read this, just wanted to refresh my mind a bit.curious if you plan to update this or discontinue it i hope you dont discontinue this of corse isince its one of my favorite stories.well hope you still have feelingfor this story and continue it
person smint45
schedule February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!!! I really loved it!!! Thank you so much for the update!!!! That was so close with Narutos medicin you really had me worried there!!!! But Kakshi reacted fast thank god (or you ^^)!! I can't wait for more!!! See you!!!
person rr052588
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for continuing this story. I would have always wondered how you would have ended it otherwise. It is such a sexy and complicated tale. I really hope that you continue to give it more attention. I also hope your long hiatus was caused by writer's block and not something more serious. Thank you again for your hard work.
person librarycat9
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am glad your eyes are better :D This is a fabulous story... I appreciate that it is not all rainbows and roses "oh the impossible has happened shrug and rejoice!" that so many mpregs contain *rolls eyes* lol
person hisoka
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well glad that naruto wasnt kidnapped like i originally thought but then who knocked him out?also proud that sakuras happy for the the couple and that sasuke took his anger out on the right person and not on sakura since she didnt know whatthat inhanced soldior pill would do.cant wait to see what happens next.ouch, eye sirgery sounds painful...probably would be if they dont put you down when they do it though.well hope your eyes serve you well and you dont need another operation anytimes soon.yeah life really is a bitch thats why we daydream or write our own stories.very glad you dont intend to abandon this that makes it all the better,hope you can update soon and if not hope you can just update eventually
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I always saw Naruto and Sasuke as having a little girl, but you've also got to remember, with Kyuubi inside as a fox influence he could have more than one-think instead if twins or triplets-he has a litter. However I see a beautiful little girl, her 'mothers' bubbly and happy personality but her fathers stubbornness and possessiveness. She has tanned skin,her 'mothers' figure but her fathers black eyes. Her face shape is Sasuke's but her long silky hair is Naruto's, except the long black streaks through the blond, which would highlight the beauty of it.

There is something so innocent and beautiful about her that she wins the love and affection of the entire village before she is even five and Tsunade, Kakashi and Iruka are enamored by her, she has them wrapped around her little finger, just like her mom and dad.

I see a girl because she is everything pure and good about Naruto-with Sasuke mixed in but hidden. I don't see the villagers growing to fawn over a boy-child, they would just look at him as 'the spawn of the demon'. An girl they would look at and see-despite her heritage-and the possibility of becoming a ninja later-as small and fragile,so not possibility a danger, but since she came crawl Naruto & Sasuke taught her to not only defend herself and use her chakra but use her smarts to talk her way out of any situation.

person tigoxgirl
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nya! I want to read the next chapter so bad! Update soon! Onegai? *hands over sweets for encouragement* =^_^=
person Anon
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All of this talk of Naruto needing to go on this mission to prove his own self worth. To prove that the village needed him. He would fight anybody who tried to stop him. Naruto (and you) were making it all about him_what about the other people on the mission that were expecting a Naruto at full power (because he was lying to them); and because Naruto was too weak for the mission--other ninjas, his friends; died or got hurt. Why was there none of that in the previous chapter? I don't usually like to start reading unfinished stories--because when they're good and they don't get finished-I get disappointed_looks like that is going to be the case with this one.