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Hi! Thanks for your raves about my story with Neji and Gaara. I want to thank you, and I decided to look up your email, but then instead I read all 7 chapters (plus author note) of this story. It's my first male pregnancy story. Interesting--so Naruto becomes a sort of hermaphadite. I've never read one of the these before--but hey, it works. I really like how you have Sasuke fighting his voyeurism. It's very romantic!

YAY!!!! I lubs it! write more plz!! and soon.
*offers a bribe of cookies and cake*

~VIVA*LA*SMUT~

I can't believe that I have never reviewed this...I mean, I don't know what to say. It is wonderful. Everything about it is just pure awesome. I am pretty much at a lost for words. I nearly died from the lemon scene..lol. You so rock!

I think you're brilliant!

more soon!

Naruto's a herm! Wow. That's a good approach on the Mpreg thing, which doesn't really make it Mpreg. Unless Kyuubi did that temporarily? Hmm, we shall see, eh? And that lemon was hot! Poor Naruto though. Sasuke is bad for screwing him in his sleep.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! You're so evil!!! That 'commenting' at the end was hallarious! Hehe I loved the chapter
(was there a chapter I DIDN'T love?)!!!!!!!!!!!! Geee!!!!!! That was such a sexy chapter!!! Poor Naruto is shy, that
must irk Sasuke to no end! Damn you for giving me a nosebleed!!! And making me drool!! Damn.... Gah!!! I now love
you!!! I think I already did, but now I officially love you!!! You're like a master a writing smut!!! And just about
everything else too. I can't believe you call yourself a "ammiture scribbler". Tsk, tsk! I for one think that you
are one of the most talented writers I've ever seen! (And oh boy have I seen ALOT!) AND if someone's confused about
something, you explain it expliclantly! Though I personally have never been confused by anything you've written so
far!! ^-^ Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!!!!

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WAH! Naruto is sure to get pregnaant very soon! I wonder how long will it take... 9 months like humans or faster?
Wahtever it is.. i am excited.. update soon~~~

Fantastic. Love this series. Cant wait for Sasuke to bring up his new "discovery" to Naruto.LOL.

Wow. This was awesome! Hooray for the Uchiha's possessiveness. And that smutty scene of him molesting innocent Naru-chan in his sleep was classic. Goodness, I've been curious about Naruto's 'differences' regarding male anatomy and I am very happy to find out what it was. Heh, it brings to mind an old Dragonball Z Truten fic. Goodness that fic was my first Mpreg. And now, years later, it's Naruto with that extra characteristic and a pregnacy on the way. Once again, hooray!

I think that you've improved your writing. Not to say it wasn' great before, but now it seems like it flows even better, especially the dialogue. Still, you've always been great at writing smut so I'm not sure if you can really improve on that; you're already the best!

Hopes for early updates, but I'm completely satisfied with this chapter. It's so complete that I don't mind waiting for more... For a reasonable time^.^