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for This can't be happening!

by nekochannya

person kelly
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.O when will they find out he's pregnant? hopefully it'll be soon...i think you should begin adding in some morning sickness just to make it interesting, keep up the excellent writing ^_^
person lo
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, you really have my attention. Keep up the good work.
person dut
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter... Its so cute and funny! The part where Sasuke was saying all that crap and Naruto just agreed to it ha ha! Sasuke has definately turned a new leaf eh? He was even willing to seek Kakashi for help.. So sweet.. I am excited for the next chapter!
person XZanayu
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Naruto-chan is pregnant. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Briryan
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Loved the flashback scene with Kakashi and Sasuke. It was cool!P I was wondering if you could email me when you post new chapters of this story? Please and thank you. Can't wait till the next chapter comes out.
person wendyghost
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Naruto is with child! yay"! Go Sasuke you dog! *Coughs* Anyways, that was a good chapter hope to hear from you soon!
person byatch
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i cant believe it. is naruto pregnate? is that posible? update soon!!
person Hello
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what's wrong with Naruto, he's exhausting his self. Very nice update. :D
person Lici
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi! What has possessed you?
Can I be possessed too?
PLEASE?!

Wonderful story and great character fluffiness!
I want to read more and have oodles of goodness
that involve Sasuke, Naruto, and everyone else!
Please update soon!

Email me when do do, please.
licikitty@yahoo.com

Much thanks!
person Yukino
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You say that you are just a beginner at writng, but somehow I can't believe that. And that author's note you put
in was so deep and so absolutely true, it really touched me. You really put alot of emotion into Sasuke and
Naruto. It's very easy to tell what the characters are thinking, what their expressions are, and how deeply their
emotions truely run. Sasuke's worry for Naruto truely touched me and me realize how much Sasuke needs Naruto, and
how much Naruto needs Sasuke. Naruto truely does deserve to be loved and never let go, and I loved how you
emphasized that fact with that couple who spoke such hateful and selfish words. Pleae update soon, I honestly can
barely wait for the nxt chapter to come.

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