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Finally! Sasuke grows a backbone and stands up for Naruto and tells someone (Tsunade) else that he loves him. I'm concerned for Naruto's physical well-being. If he indeed is pregnant, it seems the pregnancy is taking a heavy toll on him. I like the way you show what each is thinking, while trying to find the courage to say it out loud. Great story! I look forward to reading more of your imagination's caprices.

So Naruto's experiencing the symptoms! Man, that ranting Sasuke went on while Naruto was falling asleep was WHORE-LARIOUS. I laughed until my stomach hurt. Poor Naruto. Nice to know that Sasuke's taking care of him though. I wonder what both his and Sasuke's reactions will be when they find out what the actual deal is. I'm glad Kakashi's around in this one too. I imagine with Sasuke already possesive it'll increase threefold with a little Uchiha on the way...interesting lol. Update soon pls!

This has got to be my most favorite fic! I love an over possessive Sasuke, and the mpreg part makes it even better. You're doing such an awesome job and I can't wait until the next real chapter =D

Whatever ppl say about yoru fic I LOVE it.. ^^- (i've seen complete naruto and sasuke makeovers .. sooo) I love it and I hope you go on (y) please don let us down ... and good luck *hugs*

I loved the essay; while I didn't have any questions, specifically, about your authoring, it still did clear some things up about your topic and style.

Also, it was very well-played, love, and I enjoyed reading it. It was an extrodinary piece of literature.

hey, i love ur story1 so write and ignore everyone else!

Please update soon. :p

x.x Urg... I hate leaving even semi-bad reviews, but I've got to say this. I couldn't even get through this whole chapter. I've loved everything before this, but Naruto in this chapter was just... too much. I got to the part where Sasuke was trying to explain, and Naruto just flips out and starts insisting that Sasuke was using him no matter what Sasuke says. ^^; It was all so very... over-dramatic and out of character for Naruto. I just had to stop at that part. He was just... ranting about how Sasuke had used him and all and it wasn't NARUTO... it was a bitchy girl. ^^; But not Naruto at all. I'm sorry, I just... maybe it's that it's late. I'll try reading this again in the morning, and maybe I'll be able to get past the way Naruto is acting, but... I can't right now.

Gyah, I know this isn't very coherent. When I leave reviews with real criticism, I like to make it at least somewhat helpful to the author, instead of just tossing things I didn't like at them and not giving reasons why or ways to improve it. It's really late, so I'm having difficulty doing this, but I'll try anyway. Ah... I guess Naruto was just over uke-fied, something a lot of authors do. Some readers like it, so I guess it's a matter of preference. I can handle him being uke, but what I CAN'T handle is him being a girl, which is what he was in the parts of this chapter that I actually read. He was acting like a bitchy girl, as I said before, and being overly dramatic.

As for giving suggestions, I'm not quite sure what to say. I'd tell you to try to tone down the way Naruto was acting a bit, but that would mostly require him to believe Sasuke when Sasuke told him that he wasn't using him, and that might screw up the rest of your plot. I don't know, since I didn't finish reading the chapter. Anyway, I'm sorry, and please don't take this badly. Just trying to be a helpful reader. I DID love the rest of the fic that came before this, and wish you good luck in future writing!

Ack!(uses hand to shield keyboard from blood and drool)tissues where are my tissues?!(tissue comes flying out of nowhere to hit T.W. in the head) Gee Thanks Itachi that's so sweet of you, bastard. Man talk about a nosebleed. The first sex scene was excellent but this was even better amazingly so. And I love the awkward Sasuke moment with Naruto being so stubborn. You're dang good.

I love it.....Had to read the complete one though. Orginally found this on FF.net and decided that I had to come here and read the whole thng. So Yeah, I laughter really hard about the whole "velcro human complex" thing....really funny. So yeah, can't wait for the next chapther....so yah for now.