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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*DIES FROM A MASSIVE AMOUNT OF BLOOD LOST* HEHEHEHEHEHEE
lov this story i cant wait for the next installment
lov this story i cant wait for the next installment
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying this fic. Also like how you handled the seal. keep going!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wai! Sasuke! I wanna see naruto swell too! Oooh... Im such a perv... Me and my fantasies...
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE that story was soooooooooooooo cute! IS there another chapter. Does Naruto-kun get pregnat????????
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You so rock!! Please update soon!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what ARE you talking about? that was damn near perfect!!! aside from a few missing 's, this is perfectly fine. and i looooooove how you write sasuke! geez, these four chapters were a combination of hot and sweet that i've rarely come across. keep it up, i beg you. update soon!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that was the most beautiful, perfectly executed lemon i have ever read.
You took it from plain sex and turned it into making love, got the reader hooked into it, and made it so realistic. I mean, you get kinda tired of all the stories out there with whips, chains, and strip teases, when we all know that the first time is usually anything but.. uh.. smooth. So i applaud you and congradulate you on a truly fantastic job, as well as a wonderful writing style and very good grammar.
Update soon!
You took it from plain sex and turned it into making love, got the reader hooked into it, and made it so realistic. I mean, you get kinda tired of all the stories out there with whips, chains, and strip teases, when we all know that the first time is usually anything but.. uh.. smooth. So i applaud you and congradulate you on a truly fantastic job, as well as a wonderful writing style and very good grammar.
Update soon!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! This is amazing! And the lemon was beautiful and very well written! Aha! And Naruto is going to get pregnant too? Wow! I can't wait.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! And I think you did a good job on Sasuke, it's ok for OOC and plus Naruto brings out emotions in him in the series so its not much OOC!! Keep up the good work and update soon!!! ;0)
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 was great. You really got into the minds of the characters as you were telling the story. Nice job!! Keep up the good work.