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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now that I could read it better, I can say that I definitely liked it. I can't wait until your next chapter:D
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start! I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this, and I can't wait to see what you do with it. That was a great summary you had, by the way. It really drew me in when something else might not have. I'll be waiting for an update!
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey that is not fair!!
Why did you have to leave it in a cliff hanger?!?
Damn cliff hangers!!!
Can't wait to read the next one!!
Why did you have to leave it in a cliff hanger?!?
Damn cliff hangers!!!
Can't wait to read the next one!!
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. That whole chase and survival scenes was great!! Very nice!!