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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why did you find it necessary to have the Hokage have hardening nipples and a wet pussy as she fantasized about Neji? While she was supposed to be worrying about the life of Naruto and his unborn child you have her almost masturbating and/or sexually molesting a paralyzed Neji. Where does this fit into the plot? What was the point?
How convenient it is for Naruto to finally admit his stupid mistake of insisting to do this mission---while he's getting himself and his comrades killed. Like it wasn't obvious before the mission. Naruto is always thinking about his precious people_he knew he would be putting them at risk. To have him put his pride before their safety is so not in character.
I'm glad you're not finishing this story_it gets suckier and suckier with each consecutive chapter--you must have realized this yourself_since you chose not to finish it. It would be nice to the fans/readers if you would delete stories you don't intend to finish. It's a waste of our time and it's a waste of website resources.
How convenient it is for Naruto to finally admit his stupid mistake of insisting to do this mission---while he's getting himself and his comrades killed. Like it wasn't obvious before the mission. Naruto is always thinking about his precious people_he knew he would be putting them at risk. To have him put his pride before their safety is so not in character.
I'm glad you're not finishing this story_it gets suckier and suckier with each consecutive chapter--you must have realized this yourself_since you chose not to finish it. It would be nice to the fans/readers if you would delete stories you don't intend to finish. It's a waste of our time and it's a waste of website resources.
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June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the December one and I might officially hate you. How can it just stop... no. I won't allow it. Updates are life. They make me happy. Such a good story and you stopped right there! Was it Neji in the bushes? Sasuke? Who? Will Naruto be taken? Killed? What? Grrrr....
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still no update huh.... *sigh*
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are SOOO evil with your cliff hanger.. BUT .. finaly new reading material.. ^^- it felt like ages sins I last read this story.. *good guy pose*
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah! cliff hanger!!
who grabbed Naruto?? Was it Neji?? Pleeeaaaaassssseeeee let it be Neji!
who grabbed Naruto?? Was it Neji?? Pleeeaaaaassssseeeee let it be Neji!
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Neji steps into the picture! *flails* I had always thought he would be a loyal and devoted friend to Naruto. I hope Naruto will stay safe from danger....*cries* Can't wait to read what happens next! What a great read! :D
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That hokage is going to be in the middle of a big storm if Sasuke finds out something happened to Naruto. I wouldn't want to be anywhere around when he finds out.
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I was looking for this story last week. I was thinking about, and I was like, I wondered if it updated since the last time I read it, and I couldn't find it, xD but now I did, and I guess you just updated, lol.
Well you are evil for leaving it like that, but I can guess what happen. Neiji came at the right time and knocked out Naruto before he could do any more damages to himself :P
lol, well please updated soon :D
Well you are evil for leaving it like that, but I can guess what happen. Neiji came at the right time and knocked out Naruto before he could do any more damages to himself :P
lol, well please updated soon :D
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm so glad you updated this story. I haven't lost faith in it whatsoever. What a cliffy though. You're a bad girl lol. I am so interested in seeing what happens. Brining Neji into the mix will be awesome too. He's one of my fav characters. Good luck with school, but please, do update soon!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas!!!! Happy Yule!!!! Joyful Quwanza!!!! Festive Hannuka!!!! (OK couldn't spell the last two, but you get the idea) Like long chapters, and like lots of them. LOLOLOLOL Welcome back!!!! I am so glad you are continuing this story!!!!!