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for This can't be happening!

by nekochannya

person suzie
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was great...
person roely
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally an update! i been waiting and waiting and waiting!
person Brittany
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what Tsunade going to do.
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!! I could just squeeze you to death if it didn't mean I'd never get to see the end. XD Please update again soon!
person katie
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool! awesomw story! i read the whole thing in one go cause im stuck in bed with a virus *snifflesniffle* pity me!!! *ahem* anywayz, it is a tad angsty at some parts, but also really funny and well written. I can't wait to see what happens when naruto and sasuke find out, not to mention the rest of them, PLEASE DONT GIVE NARUTO BOOBIES...I saw that done once before and personally the image is pretty disturbing and would detract from his manly sexiness *nods sagely* Anyway, I like this fic a lot since a lot of sasunaru fics end up with naruto pregnant but it is never really the focus of the story and acts more as a means to an end rather than an emotionl journey, i think that they take it too lightly and the theme isnt really explored at all...BUT YOU FIXED ALL THAT!! Woot! xx
person dana
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was so stoked when i noticed that you made an update thanks for that. i really like the way you cliffed at the end. i am wondering how the fifth is going to solve this problem. i will love perverted possesive sasuke forever (and shy naruto is so cute). please do not make us wait for the next thrilling episiode to long okay.
person VRon8899
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I rarely read Mpreg.....cuz for most of them how naruto gets pregnant..o whoever paired with its kinda silly...but this is actually really well thought out and believable! Good job! I lvoe the story line and the sex it..amazing...XD hehe. I can't wait for more!! Please update soon!!
person Saiou-chan
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I've been dieing to know to know what was going to happend for months! Took you long enough, don't do that again! Now, how many babies we talking here, 2,3? With the amount of weight you were mentioning, sounds like it's going to be more then one, no way would he have trouble getting into his cloaths at two months.
person Tiffany
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooo good! Please more!
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What will Tsunade do? So can't pull Naruto off the mission, nor can she risk Naruto's and Sasuke's unborn child or like Tsunade said, Kohona would recieve a extremely dangerous enemy in Sasuke Uchiha. whatever her decision will be I hope its the right one. Hurry with the next chapter!!