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Glad to see an update after sooooo long. I actually had to think for a minute before I remembered this story, though it was good enough that I didn't have to think too hard. I'm glad to see that someone knows that Naruto's pregnant, though I was hoping Naruto himself would find out. I have to say I'm surprised that neither Sasuke or Naruto were thinking about this 'extra part' of Naruto's and wondering if there could be any consequences to using it in sex. I guess the pleasure of the situation overruled any thoughts on what it could be and what kind of implications it could have towards Naruto's anatomy. I guess they'll think about it afterwards when they find out that Naruto's pregnant. Which I hope will be soon, along with your next update. Soon please:)

THis is great! Please don't turn Nauto into a girl. Any way I like where this story is going, even though I think Nauto is being selfish and endangering his friends by lieing about his health. Any way this is a well written story with a good plot line. Great job!!

Thanks for the update!!hoping Naruto and the unborn child would be okay...on the next chapter, I don't want any death to happen....I want a happy ending on the story....

I love it!!!!

It's real and emotional and wondeful. Please update soon!!!!

i was just thinking about this story the other day, and i'm so happy that you updated it! oh, i can't wait for naruto to find out. except, i know that tsunade probably won't tell him for fear of ruining the mission, so i guess i can't wait until the letter reaches kakashi. i mean, someone has to know if they continue the mission so extra care can be taken with naruto, and kakashi's as good a choice as any. oh, so exciting!

i look forward to the next chapter!!

Why does Naruto Say Sasuke's name like that? I can't wait for the next chapter! I knew Naruto had to be pregnant!

oooo, dun-dun-DUUUUUUUUN OMG THE M-PREG COMETH!!!! teehee, i enjoy your version of M-Preg, with naruto being so bashful and ashamed of his "other hole" and sasuke loving it, because hey, more ways to fuck his dobe, right? how can that be bad? and now there are wonderful little Uchiha chillins without involving pretty little girls. i like that sakura isn't mean and horrible here too, because she really isn't in cannon, just a little naive and hopeless at first, but she gets better.

anyways, looooooong update and cuteness get you extra points, and i hope we can see more updates soon, because i really want to know how sasuke reacts to this, and naruto too, and will Tsunade tell them before they get home and risk compromising the mission?

I sure hope that Tsunade does the right thing and lets Naruto know he is pregnant!! Love this story! :)

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well are you going to update this story. i am really hoping that you will