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for This can't be happening!

by nekochannya

person LFO
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reeeeeeeaaaaaaaallllllllllllllly like your story and I'd love it if you could update it soon. I have no complaints whatsoever. Your story was perfect.
person Onawa
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapterS *not so subtle hint* I have even reread the story thus far (Inner Sanctum too) I am looking forward to a seme Naruto, don't often see that. This is also the first male preg story I have read, and enjoyed.

I am sure you already have a plan for your plot, but I was thinking that it would be an interesting conversation for Sasuke to sit with Naruto, and let him know that he has seen his "secret place" and that it is more than OK with him. Somehow comfort and convince Naruto that there is nothing to be ashamed of - Sasuke loves all of him. Whew - there is my romantic 2 cents worth. It is your story, I just enjoyed it and was trying to think of what might come next....
person Joan Mistress of Magic
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story mate! I love how your writing this, you've changed some of the common elements others over use. When are they going to find out Naruto is pregnet, because from the symtems I'd say they should know soon, like in the next chapter or the one after, and Oh! Is he going to have more then one baby? That woould be cool. Hey maybe you should write an Epiologe at the end of this in the future, and Naruto and Sasuke have like two sets of twins, and one set of triplets, with another set on the way. I can see that happening since foxes are notorious for multiple births. Great story so far, I hope you update soon, I reeeeeeeeeaaally wanna read more.
person Onawa
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!! Cliffhangers...ARGH!!!!

Whew! now that the spastic outrage is over, I really have enjoyed how you develop your characters. I am also happy to see a dominant Naruto - only found that once before - Go Naruto! Also good to see the "uke" be stronger. I am enjoying the story, and looking forward to the next installment.
person Saiou-chan
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I loooooooove your story so far, my only gripe is, why haven't they found out Naruto is pregnat yet? I wonder if Neji's eyes can see if someone has more then one chakra source, like their pregnat. And Naruto should not be going on that missin if he's pregnat, they need to find out before he gos, SAVE THE BABY SASUKE!
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that's one hell of an update, I totally understand how life can be and how it can keep you from doing what you want, but this chapter totally made up for the wait, I'm sure you will give us a new one pretty soon (or as soon as you're able) and make up for this evil cliffie ;)

schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you stopped there! Grr. But oh so good. I'm glad you update. I was wondering what was going on with this story. Glad to see that Naruto decided to follow Kakashi's orders lol. How do you think it'll be before Naruto, Sasuke, or anyone for that matter realizes whats really going on with Naruto? I can't wait to find out! That part there about the old wive's tale about Uchiha's being over protective when thier spouse was expecting made me even MORE curious lol. Good job once again. Update soon!
person Trish
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that was a very evil cliffy! Please update soon!!!!!!
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know what the extra hole is for!! lol read bout it on truelywicked's "why orange?" who would of thunk it? a natural birthing canal! lmao!! and sasuke unknowingly broke it in! -laughs harder- so kakashi realized that naruto's preggy. oh lordy tsunade's gonna flip over this. nice job on the chappie!!
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...I don't like uke!Sasuke...WHAAHHA! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Anyway, I like how they don't know he's pregnant yet. It's very realistic, and it makes the story more believable!