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Great fic. I have to admit that I wonder how Sasuke feels about Hinata and her feelings for Naruto. I can't see him handling them well. Update soon please. Thanks.

OMG... O.O That is an Evil Cliffie from Hell... You are gonna update soon-ish right??? LOL, Anyway, I'm still torn on the issue of whether or not the dobe should go. The thought of him losing the baby makes me cringe and my whole body tense. But I've decided to have some faith that you're not out to torture my favourite couple. I've been reading Arora's stories and as good as they are they make you really apprehensive about the horrors that can come before a happy ending. Anyway I chose to focus on the positive aspects and right now that's me in breathless anticipation of the promised smut!!! So glad things are better, and wishing you floods of warm and Fuzzy feelings! Til next time Ja Na.

Yea!!! A new chapter. I was worried you wouldn't continue. Love this chapter and looking forward to the rest. Me

This shows how much I like your story, I actually logged in to review it. BTW I thought I'd let you know, in case you didn't, that now you can enable anonymous reviews. I tried to talk the mods into enabling anonymous reviews for everybody and letting those who have issues cancel it, like ff.net does, considering so many authors do want anon reviews but don't know that it's an option but they've decided to take the overly cautious route so I'm trying to pass the info on to authors I notice who still have anon reviews disabled. Anyways on to your chapter:

That really is an annoying place to end it (I've decided I really hate cliffies or semi-cliffies), but I hope that it's a sign that the next update will come quickly. I can somewhat understand his reasons for wanting to go, but personally I wouldn't care so much that I'd go out in a state where I'd be risking my life more than normal. But I guess like he said, you'd have to be born as he was to understand the feeling. So I guess Gaara might understand. Anyways, I hope that this appointment with Tsunade will bring about the discovery that he's pregnant, I'm just waiting for it. I can't wait for his reaction, and Sasuke's especially after that Old Wive's Tale comment. Hee hee, I really hope your update comes next week:)

That was a great chapter! Kakashi is he slick or what. Can't believe Naruto went along with what he said. Really looking forward to reading the next chapter. That is going to be sooo good.

Oh yeah I'd call that an evil cliffie from hell alright. But it's okay I love this chapter anyway. BTW when are you going to update Inner Sanctum?

Whew...I like this aggressive Naruto! Oh my god. This was awesome. I will have visions of this in my head for the rest of the day...hell, probably the rest of the week/month/year! Kind of speechless right now. Love ya.

very evil, and naruto...! omg! but when, when, WHEN will they find out naruto's pregnant?!!! and, seriously, if tsunade wants to, she can change the start time of the mission to check naruto. did no one ever think of that? and i would so love more of kakashi thinking about 'who' naruto looks like. ^.^ this chapter, especially naruto's attitude and maturity, absolutely made me quibble!! i loved it. now... what oath? did i miss it, was it his nindo? was it his promise to kakashi? or is it in part two, something to sasuke?

anyway, great job!! update soon!!

oh yes! this was much better!! how did you find it? I enjoyed the flow, I think you did a good job of dealing with the differnt POV's with out having to out right tell the reader. we are of course old enough to figure it all out ne?! XD

I loved the way Naruto is taking contorl of Sasuke, i sense yummy lemony goodness on the horizion!! XD

kiki

OMG that was so hot!! Poor Sasuke is going to be jumping through the trees with a slight limp there! I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see more!! I love how you have handled everything so far!