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I have to admit, I was getting anxious for an update from you. I just missed your distinct writing style. Usually you update one of your stories so I'm left pretty satisfied, but since you weren't able to update anything, I was extra-excited to read this.

I loved the length too. I was actually surprised when the chapter was over because it didn't feel like I had been reading for very long. And you left us with a cliffie too!

I absolutely loved everything about this chapter. Writing-wise. Plot-wise too, though I have to admit I don't like angst, I do think it just makes your fic better.

I notice Naruto's pregnancy is developing. The weird food cravings and the overall wooziness. I can understand his nausea being so severe since he's so stressed, both physically and mentally. I'm really hoping he's going to be okay... Well, with a lover like Sasuke, he really should be fine.

Hee, I wonder how Sasuke's going to react when he finds out Naruto's pregnant. I guess that's going to be some big compensation for all the angsty-ness they're going through.

Oh, and the complexity of the sub-plot; the war that's surfacing amongst the villages... Genius. It was kinda hard to remember all the facts and tid-bits for me, but you explained the situation very well. I really liked it.

What else... The vomiting scenes. Very well-written. I gagged a little and cringed a lot. I really didn't want Naruto to go through that in that dirty alley. If he would just stop being a stubborn dobe and let Sasuke take care of him... Eh, I understand why Naruto's acting the way he is, but that doesn't change the fact that putting his life in jeopardy is not good. When will he get it through his thick skull that he's worth more than any of the other villagers just because of the basic fact he's Naruto! I guess that's another part of Sasuke's job; making Naruto understand his worth.

'Kay... I think I'm almost done. Just have to say I love that little bit of smut when Naruto was cleaning up at the well... Very smexy!^.^

another great chapter. god i love the well you write. poor naruto. when i was pregnant with my first son i was just like that. it was sooooo terrible and gross. maks me shiver just thinking about it.

anyway, i look forward to your next chapter. i can't wait until they find out that naruto's pregnant! love ya lots!

Yay! Naruto can finally go on a mission. Should he actually go is another story. I myself loved the long chapter. Can't wait till they find out what is wrong with Naruto. Looking forward to the next chapter.

wow.. thats one argument... I hope they'll make up soon... More more!

YAY! An update i'm sooo happy. I was wondering what had happened. This chappie broke my heart a lil. Naruto is going through some turmoil aman. I'm hoping that he finds out for once whats going on with him because this is just taking a toll on his mind with his manhood and all, not to mention physically. I hope when this is resolved this wll only serve to bring Naruto and Sasuke closer together. The bastard loves him so much! Anyway, good job. Update soon!

Why isn't there more?! *sobs* I keep checking... but it doesn't appear. I guess i can't say anything, ive only written half a chapter since august :p

nice story, can't remember if i reviewed before, but in case i didn't:

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!! that was hot! naruto is such a dobe!

To copy the name of your chapter, Finally, an update. I've been checking for one since your last one:) I love this story. I wasn't too sure about it near the beginning, I was already following a ton of stories and I wasn't sure I wanted to add one more but I decided to keep reading and I'm so glad I did. It's so good and the only thing that would make it better would be them figuring out that Naruto's pregnant.

I figure they would want to check for that possibility given that it seems that Naruto has... extra parts I guess and he's not healing like he should be. But I guess again they wouldn't think of that, but they should definitely be checking for something. I figured that he would have one last check up before they left, to make certain that he was up for it but I guess not. Unless they're planning to do it really early before they leave, or maybe they don't feel a need to because Sakura's going.

I think the vomiting and fainting were done okay. The vomiting was suitable disgusting but the fainting would have been better if it hadn't been leading towards the end of the chapter, I wanted more. I have to say though, I found it a bit funny when Naruto said he was 100% male when it doesn't seem that he is. I guess it's the way you feel, not the physical.

Anyways, I hope that now that your muse is back and that it seems part of the next chapter is written we won't have to wait so long for an update.

Oh my... After everything Sasuke has seen... He really can't say Naruto is pregnant???? For the love to ramen!!!! The morning sickness, the mood swings... even the fucking hole (XD) that came from who knows where!!!!! He realy has ti speak to Tsunade! and Naruto needs to be more self-concious!!!

Anyway, I still love it! and I'm really surprised that in this chapter, there wasn't any lemon! (I grow used to read your lemons on every update you make... not complaining... just saying >.>)

UPDATE SOON!
BTW: YOUR LEMONS ROCK!!!!!!!

You updated! YAY! I've been waiting so long for this! Hehe.

The vomit scene was very realistic and graphic, which is a good thing! Even though it was a bit gross! But like I said, it was realistic! And Tsunade explaing the missions was amazing too. Your explanations are very good and to the point.

Hi, so glad you're back, Happy New Year!!! All I can say is OMG I'm torn between wanting to hug the Dobe and wanting to kick his ASS for being so bloody stubborn ~sigh~ such is life, Update soon please, I have to know that the idiot is ok.