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for Escort Duty

by SilverPhantom

person dragoncisco
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was relly happy to see that chapter 9 was added when I checked tonight. I like this story and hope you will be able to continue it soon.
person Miya
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more~ ^_^ Please do update when you can~!
person Hestia
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's rather sweet to find a Kakashi/Iruka that is so romantic and mostly lemon-free. Nice job on your first lemon! Thanks for sharing your ideas!
person GypsyWillow
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is a little short but at least it was something and if reviewing encourages you to keep writing then I have no problem telling you I still like and read your story! I hope you at least try to wrap the story up even if it's only a couple of chapters more, it would be mean to leave it unfinished.
person dragoncisco
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed first chapter and will read more.
person tasukigirl
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was curious to see how you'd develop this one and I gotta say, it's nicely done. Very cute fic. Keep it up :)
person GypsyWillow
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You shouldn't worry about writting lemons just write what your comfortable with and it'll be fine. Although that was a tasty little bit of Kak/Iru action and I think it's alright they didn't "go all the way" as you said, we'll think of it as a build up to more action between the two.
Aside from the smut I find the plot very intriguing, I can't wait to see what you do with the story next.
person Sir Magus
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn that was awesome u gots to luv KakaxIru- lemon is next right? i hope so pls update soon
person miya
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update Please~!!! ^_^ The story is really well written. I can't wait to see what happens~
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are the last few lines implications that Kakashi and Iruka will be having hot sex? if they don't, well they should. *death glare* KAKA/IRU IS HOT!!! HELL YA!