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by SilverPhantom

person Anon
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love how you went along this plot. Iruka/Kakashi is pooniful XD
person rice
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes I read this :)
update please
person sarah
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story, i cant wait for more.. it is kinda hard to find a good Kakashi and Irukia( is that how you spell them?) story, but yours is really good
i cant wait to read the next chapter!
person hell_lot23
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I love you. Marry me and continue with the story??
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooties! it's coming along nicely. keep up the good work! i'm loveing this fluff but a bit of action wouldn't hurt *wink wink* :)
person nubiti
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kakshi/Iruka is love. Seriously, there should be more kakairu fics. This one is interesting and well written. (Though you have some grammar mistakes, but hey, everybody makes those) Keep up the good work!
person Mumi
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Keep on writing, it's coming out great! -prances around-
person MidnightRoyal
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story, and am very much looking forward to reading more. ^__^
person Callmenot
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really like this story! please keep going it's turning out great! <3
person Katja
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Although I am not very good at properly saying how much and what exactly I enjoyed in a story, I can at least say that you write very well. The progression has me anxious for more story, but please don't think that that means I would want to see you rush things. I like the little things you add to your story as well, like the meaning of the names. (A friend of mine does the same type of thing with a dictionary.) Do continue to write and post as soon as possible, please. I am enjoying this immensely. = )