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for Sleeping with the Enemy

by DevilnBlue

person Marie
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Really like this story and the plot that you have going here. I hope you feel better soon.

Marie
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm, theres nothing i enjoy more than a little naruto being molested by one uchiha while the other is a room or two away (or watching, but we're not even close to that ... yet? ^.^) teehee, poor naru, i have this vision of him calling out sasuke's name in bed and gettin' beat for it *fic love*
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it keep writing or i will hunt you down and lets just say heheheh....I forgot what i was going to say O.o
person Dk
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing! I'm reviewing! Gah....I really wanna know what's going to happen next. Gees, I sure hope you're going to update soon. The suspense is pretty much killing me right now. Hah...you should make a different 'not part of the story' chapter....Sasuke catching Naruto feeling himself up. Oh, that would be so funny. XD If I could write desent stories, I would ask for permission to write it myself, but alas, my writing skills SUCK...you're a WAY better writer. So I'll wait for the next chapter. Hmmm....I really wanna write a story now...but I have no idea what it would be about, so I'll just keep surfing the Naruto MALE/MALE stories. I love your story.
person Talakailover
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is just a little hard to tell when flashbacks start and begin. Maybe you should try italics or something? Other that that, I love it. I think Itachi needs more love.
person Heaven_Is_Hell
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O It was awesome! I can't wait for you to write more. I just luff your writing style. The plot is pure genius. ^^
person KinOfDragons
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gigglesnort* This is cute in a very hot, erotic way~ I can't wait for the next update!
person DespondentAngel
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not logged in right now but... yea! Love this story so much and I've been wondering, is this a SasuNaru fic or a ItaNaru fic? Anyhow, love it, it's really a good start. Please, Please continue this fic.
person TheDeviant (too lazy to login)
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, such a cruel cliff-hanger ending. (*sob..) Anyway, i really like this story so far, so update soon! (or i'll cry..)
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooo who could that be...............hummmmmmmmmmm??????..........(Still thinking)...........hummmmmmm. O well guess ill find out in your next chapter. Hopefully sooner rather then latter. Lol till next time. see ya. ^_~
Bye-Bye.