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for Sleeping with the Enemy

by DevilnBlue

person Shosuro
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What?!?!?!?
That's all kinds of wrong!!!!
You have to do that wouldn't you!!!!

***sniff Sniff****

you left in a cliff hanger!!!

****wipes tears from eyes****

****look up to AUTHOR with big,wet, tear soaked eyes****

"please, please update soon"

****sniff sniff*****

"I shall wait by the computer until you do"



~Evil Smile~


~Shosuro~
person jenny
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhh.... I want some of whatever naru is having. Please continue.
person Backinaction D.J.
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far :). Is it gonna be a SasuNaru too, not that I mind ItaNaru? I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work ^_^.
person cepheus
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... soo...

itanaru? ^^ *suddenly glomps* please, don't tell me this is going to lead to sasunaru... itanaru is so rare... and it's my OTP...

^^ *pulls out kunai* i can always threaten you. naruto dressed up as a made and put in itachi's house, only to be sexually molested by the older uchiha sounds so damn good to me already. <3

wonder one thing though... naruto doesn't seem too happy about it all... does he at least love itachi back? ^^

anyway, great start, can't wait for more! ^^ *cuddles*

Ceph/SOY/MF
person Gingitsune
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's been quite a while since I reviewed any story but I'm curious as to how Naruto ended up with Itachi when he thinks he loves Sasuke. While I'm happy with this pairing (there's too little Ita X Naru around!) I'm curious as to how you are going to pan out this story. Obviously Sasuke doesn't know of Naru's identity. Hmm....this is an interesting beginnning. Can't wait to see the other chapters!
person cherry dot
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. the "photogenic memory" really made me laugh. it's "photographic memory".
person riversprite77
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, there are so few Iticha/Naruto stories out there and even fewer that don't envolve rape. I loved that you dressed Naruto up in a mades ourtfit, it would be great if you kept Naruto in different outfits, like a school girls or kimno(don't think I spelled that right!) outfit!
person Impaktita
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your fic sizzles. I just love the way you illustrate Naruto's uniform-it was so vivid. I'm so excited to know where this fic would take your readers. I'll be waiting for the update.

ciao,

Impaktita