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for Happy Birthday, Kakashi

by mischiefmaker

person Anon
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too bad it was everyone but Kakashi and Naruto. Maybe then I would have liked it. There was just too much Sakura in it for me. Otherwise, it was readable.
person Ruby Lips9not signed in)
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're ficlets are in the wrong place. You would get more readers, reviewers and be in the right place in the general section.

Just so that you know.

Ruby Lips
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought that these 5 ficlets were absolutely wonderful. The way that you wrote each was just enough to make me smile and laugh while thinking..."Kakashi, you lucky bastard." I'm definitely going to have check out the rest of your works. My only complaint was that the stories were a bit of a tease (okay, I only say that because I'm whining on the inside wanting more Kakashi fun and goodness, not because they shouldn't have been written that way). I really did like the anecdotal way that you wrote them, very entertaining.
person Hestia
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow--I'm going to have to check out this live journal sort of thing. Any party that involves Kakashi fantasies is my kind of party!! These are great little short ones--yummy, yummy, yummy!! I feel like it's my birthday--thanks!
person Kafm
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved 2, 3, and 5. Someone needs to make them whole fics.
person Darling_425
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read those stories and I think they are kind of cute ^_^ And because there are no actual sex scenes it allows you to use some imagination of your own. Thought it makes me feel like there aren't any endings
Keep on writing!