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Absolutely amazing... I laughed and I cried... The main love story was sweet and beautiful but I especially loved KakaSasu pairing - for the first time I've read a story which made they're relationship convincing (and very hot ;) I'm glad that you've incorporated some of NaruSasu cause whether someone like it or not it's almost canon pairing so obvious in manga, it's hard to create a believable story without any hint of their closeness.

This was an amazing story! I read the whole thing before reviewing so here goes...this was great on sooo many levels. It always seemed a little more than brotherly love the way that naruto chased after sasuke and you conveyed that well in the story. How gaara and Naruto came to fall in love wal well written too. enen in the anime, you just cant help loving thge silly blonde guy and gaara really never had eyes for anybody else. You wrote really great tension, just the right amount, in every scene and it drove the story well. I was glad you mentioned about the guys ( all the guys) getting surrogates because it just wouldnt have made sense at all that four major bloodlines would die out, or that the guys would just let them. Thanks for the story, again it was great!

GEEYAH!!! I just reread Hot Sand as it is by far my favorite fanfic ever. And upon finishing the last chapter, I realizes you called out my cheering you on in the after-notes!! I didn't realize you had even observed my joy in your writing!! So of course, I had to post back. Again, a great and satisfying story you have written, justifying each relationship while steering away from losing the cannon characteristics of each person.

Absolutely one of the best.

..............that is the single most awsome thing i have ever read in my entire life.
im laughing and crying at the same time right now and im not particularly sure why but that was bloody brilliant!!!!!

gonna email me when yoo put up the sequel coz i do NOT wanna miss that!

BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!

I'm late for a job, butI had to finish!!!!! Awwww, so pretty. But what about Ino? It has been eating at me. She's bitchy, hell yes, but she deserves some happiness, too.

I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this and your others, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

is there just a general all around "please email me when you post anything new, including updates" list? :)

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Haha! Ah-hah! Ahhhh... I loved chapter ch. 11. Absolutely loved it. Especially Sasuke's response to his first blow-job. Yup, that'd be what it tastes like. I can't really imagine women really, I mean REALLY, liking the flavor. It's why they haven't made it into one of Baskin Robbin's 21 Flavors. Sooooo... I'm still not really into the whole man-on-man thing. Geez, I sound like Sasuke. Leaving reviews that parade you on your fantastic writing and then saying something like, "Yeah, sssss... not really getting into the "action" sequences, but keep 'em coming!" Sorry, I sound really bipolar. At least I admitted to a "bi"-something! There's a start!

Aww... I was hoping for a little more detail in the Sakura/Kankuro department. Good het Kankuro lemons are so hard to find and I'm sure this would have been a good one if you had continued. I'm not really into homosexual relationships and find it kind of hard to really feel anything when I read them, so normally i just skip right over anything labeled M/M, but you are such a good writer that the plot more than makes up for my squeamishness with same sex partners. And THANK GAWD you didn't make any Sakura/Ino yuri-ness.