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by promise2003

person Carla
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke and poor me!! Ohh! I do love Gaara but not over Sasuke! Never, never, never over Sasuke! Good thing that you already have like three more chapters written. Let me continue as am dying to see what is coming!

Carla
person VRon
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need to update!! Sooner then later Gawd...I *NEED* to know what happens!!!! Awesome..so scared too -begins nail biting- update update update!!!
person Fourthiv
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Those last two chapters were amazing. I cant wait to see what happens after Naruto wakes up [because, surely, he will live and wake up and have to deal with angry Gaara] Oh man! Update soon please!!!!!
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you made me cry honest to god tears. I really thought you had killed Naruto for a minute there.

Sweet, poignant, and decidedly heartbreaking, this chapter proved to me that you know how to write. This story is becoming a drug for me. I have a few stories I check for everyday, twice a day, and yours is one of them.

person Kay-san
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy, does Gaara jump to conclusions! But, admittedly I guess it would be easy to get to where he was. Still loving it! 18 chapters of "wheeeeeee"-ness! Happy, happy Kay-san. I just hope Naruto wakes up soon and explains to Gaara. It's exasperating when you see a show or read a story and all it would take is an explanation to make things better, but that explanation never comes. *sigh* Well, whatever you do I'm sure it will be marvelous. Can't wait for more! Hugs & Kisses!

Oh, and Kakashi better start lovin' on poor Sasuke.
person Randi
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter(s)!
person Cindy
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOO HA~! Story even better than lemons?~! It just gets more and more addicting. Thanks~!
person VRon
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gawd! This story gets more and more amazing ^^ I love your style ^^ Keep them coming! I'm worried too!!!
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

Anna here, I sneaked in my boss computer and used her account to review, please don't tell her!

Soooo... Kakashi loves Sasuke. Well, I think that it is off with Naruto to knock some sense into both of their heads huh?

I know that Naruto will survive, because if he doesn't no one in a twenty mile radius will survive either, because Gaara will lose it! *shudders*

Ja ne!
person Yuri-san
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
._. wow... Those last two chapters were something.
Well, for some reason I don't feel like reviewing,(must be getting lazy XD;). I'll just have to summarize:
That was awsome.
(You rock. XD)
I felt all squishy when Kakasi was worried. ^.^
(Now I'm worried Sasuke is going to die. >>;;;)
Gaara is scary! D8` (^^')
My favorite part was when Sasuke broke / everything that followed involving Sasuke and Naruto.
(You're going to kill off a main character, aren't you? *worries*)
After reading your AN I started thinking, "this is the STORY that never ends. Yes, it goes on and on my friends"...etc. to the tune of "the never-ending song" .(you know, that annoying kids song?) XD;;;