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by promise2003

person Yuri-san
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
! Your're writing chapters faster than I can read them! ;D
I just read 14 and it was so --*takes a second to grin and squee!*-- CUTE!! XD That was so sweet!! It made my eyes tear up and, it made me laugh! =^,^=
The Sasuke part at the end tugged a heart-string.
...and, now, I'm going to go read the next chapters and have my other heart strings yanked out. XD
person Yuri-san
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chap. 15:
CX *still laughing from seeing "(lemon of gloriousness)"*
The “Now get over here, your dick has a date with a snowman.” line was so funny (as was that whole scene)! :3
And the lemon: XD THE SWEETNESS!! I eat it up! (You're giving me cavities here ;P)
person anessa
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really gewd!!!oh snap...uchiha had better start taking orders! making naruto all confused like that:( I hate his character anyways so it doesn't bother me...;)
person mel
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. Great updates! I actually had to go back and see what other fic I'm waiting on and my choices are: Help Me Forget Him and then if you have time Taking Kakashi's Virginity. Thanks
person Fuyahiko
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is getting so good. u r doing great!!! ^ ^
person Jen
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! don´t you dare make naruto with sasuke and hurt gaara´s felings! do you hear me?!!!
i´m gonna hunt you down and kill you if you do *angry and strong voice* DO YOU HEAR ME?!!!

*going back to myself* ok i´m calm now! i loved it, i really did! make kakashi get slapped by sakura after she heards about it thru naruto it would be a mess, but please MAKE naru/gaara forever TOGETHER! FOREVER!!!!!!

oh and lemon scenes of nakuro e sakura would be awesome!lol

keep going i love your fanfic!
person harlita
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you reading my MIND!?

you write everything exactly as I wish it would happen!! I'm so thrilled with your story!!

more angst!? YEEESSSS!!!!

*grabs fanfic and rolls around on the ground in fangirl delight*
person Kay-san
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHEEEEE!!!!! I loved it muchly! Although I am missing SakuraxKankuro. And I want things to work out between Kakashi and Sasuke. Ah well. I'm sure you'll have more on them later. After all, by your estimate you still have PLENTY of chapters to go! Can't wait for the next installment! Hugs & Kisses!

By the way, thanks for the quick updates! A story this good would have me pulling my hair out if I had to wait too long for updates. (And a bald Kay-san would be a sad Kay-san.)
person harlita
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
......


i just cried..

im really very happy with this story and this chapter.

thank you. very beautifully done.
person VRon
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I did read this before I got the email XD lol, whihc I was checking today, and I loved it Oh so cute and hot al at the same time ^^ Keep going I love this story!!! An I'll definetly chekc out ur other story (sasunarusasu) ^^ cheers!