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by promise2003

person Jen
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg they really love each other! i never liked the pairing gaara/naruto but you completly made me change my mind! i love them!

please kankuro/sakura lemons please!!!! i won´t stop reading this fic!

UPDATES PLEASE! lol
person Mako-chan
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Another great chapter! I loved the little snowfight, it was so cute and funny! The smex was hawt as usual, no surprises there. (Keep it up!!)XP

I don't know what you've got planned for future chapters, but I just wanted to say that I agree with one of the reviwers above. I think that switching 'lemons' or partners would be a bad idea. (Yeah yeah, I'm biased, but it's still true! @__@)But whatever you do, I'll keep reading!(duh)

Anyway, wonderful chapter. Gave me lots of ideas. *wink*
person TonTon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really hope there is a kakashi/sasuke lemon soon. people who say they dont like that pairing dont know what they are missing
person TonTon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
almost forgot to say that this is one of the best naruto fanfics I have ever read. even though I am mostly into yaoi (as the pathethic female creature I am) the sakura/kankurou thing is really interesting, and I usually dont like sakura. I feel bad for kakashi and sasuke. I hope you'll fix it so they will end up together. keep on writing, you have a fan in me ^^

person Anna
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You said you wanted my opinion and that is what you'll get!

This chapter was very sweet, sweet enough to make me make an appointment with my dentist! Don't worry, I'm not complaining at all, as a matter of fact I could care less if I get a cavity, because it was well worth it.

Naruto's tour and proposal was great, I liked it very much!

The only thing I have to say is that I feel VERY sorry for Sasuke, that was the part that actually got a tear rolling on my cheek, I just love the bastard very much!

So update soon if you can!
person AnA La Pana83
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww maaaaaaaan. I've never felt so happy and yet so heartbroken at the same time reading a fic before! This is wonderful/terrible lol. I feel so happy for Gaara and Naruto, yet boy do i feel bad for the teme. It's his own fault for being so damn obstinate for so long! Sigh. Anyway, i am bracing myself for the heart strings to be torn at, tattered, and then rebuilt again. Hit me!
person Shadow2008
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooo Yeah! Updates ROCK! :D I love this story.... but dont you dare break up Naruto and Gaara its TO CUTE ! ill hunt choo down >:D Just kidden. Anyway cant WAIT till next update!
person Stagoya
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So adorable!! ^^ And that was so funny, poor Naru though. I can imagine the pain of getting pants full of snow. *shudder* Oh, and the image of Gaara standing at the stove alone is enough to make me laugh aloud. Maybe the reason he doesn't have eyebrows is because he burnt them off. ^^ Anyway, another great job, can't wait til the next update!
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Also known as MistressMuse, which is my username, not my pen name. So you're going to break my heart, huh? You sadist. Don't hurt Naruto. He's such a sweetheart and everything is going so well. Uggh. Oh well. Loved the snowman line. Classic!!
person lilithwolf
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh... sweet sweet love... I LOVED IT! this is such an awesome, well thought out, well DRAWN out story and i simply cannot wait for more.
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