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by promise2003

person Shosuro
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arrgh!!
The sweet twisted torture that you give us.
Each chapter makes me late for my class....awe who cares, I really didn't want to go to class anyways.
can't wait until you update again.
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anna here, in Yura's account again...

I'll deal with the drama, I can take it as long as you keep your promise an make it a good ending!
person trulywicked
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kakashi and poor Sasuke too. Both complete and utter morons. Well I'm sure you'll make things work out. This was very drool worthy(seriously I had to get a bucket)Keep up the excellent work.
person harlita
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

WELL DONE!!! AH!! Another excellent chapter!! ^.^

Ah.. man poor Kakashi!! And poor Sasuke!!

Keep writing!! You are making your fans VERY happy. *love*
person Hestia
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow--nice twist! How fascinating to have Sasuke being both anti-gay and pro-lovemaking! I hope Kakashi gets seriously guilty over Sasuke failing . . .
person Cindy
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so much fun! I vote to add plenty of SakuraxKanky lemons. A great story line. And only you have made me forget NaruSasu between Gaara and Kakashi, I'm happy.
person mako-chan
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! I'm really glad of the direction you're taking with Sasuke, the recent chapters had me a bit worried! But of course we all knew that Sasuke liked it up the ass XP
I wonder how Gaara will react to Naruto's suggestion of passing down the title of Kazekage to Temari so he can come live with Naruto in Konoha. I really want these two to be together and be happy, but I don't think it would be fair to Gaara, when Naruto said he couldn't do that for him because of his duty to his people. Argh! What will happen next? I can't wait to read more!
person Hestia
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very romantic! Sasuke and Kakashi is a great idea--it's kind of odd there aren't more of those fictions out there. It reminds me of when Kakashi ties Sasuke to the tree to lecture him on not using Chidori against friends . . .
person tasukigirl
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hrm, I'm not sure why this is exactly because I don't know the etymology of the word. Blond is actually gender neutral, but "blonde" is exclusively female. I didn't know this for a very long time either, so don't feel too bad *pat pat* I think I discovered it by checking the dictionary.

Should you have any other questions, feel free to email me:
tsusami03 at yahoo dot com
person firestarburst
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic even if I skipped over the Kakashi, Sasuke parts. Their not really a pair I favor. Something about those to together makes me wince. Anywhoo I love the Gaara, Naruto pairing *huggles them both*