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I need a cigarette, that was one hot chapter!! To think that it isn't even over yet. I'm wondering whats going on through the Uchiha's head now that he's been able to see through his usual stubborn stupidity after that hilarious chat with Kakashi. Anyway, i thought it was so awesome that you were able to upload the last chapter so quickly. Follow your muse!

I'm tired from work ^^; but this woke me right up! Aaaaand, since you were nice enough to give us TWO chapters--you lovely little author you ;D--I'm leaving you TWO reviews. *gives myself a cookie*
I just read chapter nine. I though "Oh! Yay!" when I saw what it was about. I'd been wondering what had happened during that time.
The thing I love most about this chapter (and it's what almost the entire chapter is about so, yay! I love the whole chapter! ;P) is the Kankuro and Temari interaction. their sibling relationship is cute and, funny and, much fun to read! You write character conversation so well! ^_^ It flows smoothly- even when they aren't talking at all (like when Kankuro pointed to his chest).
Why DID Temari move to Konoha? Maybe she just forgot about the whole "freezing her ass off" thing, eh? XD Kankuro's suggestion for her to live in Suna while Shika naps in the sun seems a lot more pleasant. XD And the fact that she's mad at him because he won't fight with her is absurdly funny! Shika's tensei brain is probably reasoning that, if he fights with her once, he'll have to do it again. I can't believe he was so lazy-ass about her going to Suna; for a genius, that doesn't seem so smart of him.
>=D the image of Temari "putting those dignitary bastards in their place" was hilarious! It seems like something she'd be good at XD
Okay, I'm gonna read the next chapter now. Another review will be forthcoming. ^^ This one seems kinda long. My brain always has so much to say when it's tired -which seems completely absurd to me. O_o

O.O
omg! Chapter 11 just popped up before my very eyes!
GAAH! *loves all over*
I haven't even finished chapter 10 yet!
*tackles you and huggles*

(Random note: I just got the strangest suspicion that Kakashi and Sasuke are gonna get together...o_O weird... I will read on and see.)

I think you forgot to put the word "you" in this sentence:
“I don’t know, your voice just hinted that were,” Kakashi teased.

Chapter 10 WAS good -better, even, than the last one.
Kakashi's sadness was well written. I was flabberghasted to learn that Iruka died!
Me: O_O... DX "WHAT!!?? ...that's really sad..." ;_;
This does make up for his man-whore-ish-ness**. Neh--But I never really had a grudge against him anyways.
Two tenseis, being idiots -it's sadly funny ^^; (Of course, I always knew Sasuke was really an idiot... XD kidding! *cough*sorta*cough* *pets Sasuke "there, there..."*)
At least Sasuke realizes he loves Naruto now...
GEEZ, Lemon Drops! Are you trying to depress me forever! XD

This might be my favorite chapter now! =D
Off to read chapter 11! *kid in a candy store here*

**that is most definitely NOT a word. XD tee, hee

Wow, this chapter was just...WOW. You calmed my fears about Sasuke, and you gave us some Kanky/Sakura moments, squeee! The hot NaruGaa lemon that followed just made my head explode. YOU WIN.

Gah! Nosebleed! Tissues! I need tissues!(tissue box comes out of no where to hit T.W. in the head)Oh gee thanks Itachi that's so sweet of you, jerk. Well that was sweet and hot. You really picked the right title for this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I.. just found this story today.. and blew through all 11 chapters. Gods alive, woman! You have a great story here!!

You crack me up!! Many parts are just damn funny. And the relationship twists, perfectly timed. Each movement by each character is just.. makes me smile.

KEEP WRITING!!! looooooooooooooove it!

Love it as always!!
Ohh, is so sad that Naruto and Gaara can't live together.
And that Sasuke figured out too late that he love the dobe...
update soon please!

It's always nice to see a man pining for a woman at times. Just been a little down recently and this chapter just made me smile. Not because it's humerous. But just because it's heartwarming to see the sibling love as well as the development of true love. Excellent chapter! :)

Wow! 2-chapter uptade! Thank you! <3 I really liked the Temari and Kankurou development! Sasuke loves Naruto? ...I guess I should have seen that one coming (I mean there's not a ninja out there that's more gay than Sasuke, right? XP ) But he's too late! Naruto loves Gaara, right? RIIIGHT? @___@ *Bites Nails*

Thank you for the notice!~