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by promise2003

person Stagoya
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great (two) chaptres! I especially like the last one, very much drama-filled. I hope you're not gonna turn this into a SasuNaru, that would break my heart. Anyway, I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chaptre! ^_^
person Jenna
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this gonna end up with Sas/Naru? I love that pairing, but I don't wanna see anyone hurt. Please let me know.
person trulywicked
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, You killed Iruka? That's...that's actually kinda brillant. I mean I can't think of anything that might cause more emotional upheaval(barring Naruto's death) and while not something I could ever bring myself to do killing off Iruka is really a good emotional springboard.
person Shosuro
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn it!!
How can you do such a thing!!
I am always first a Sasuke/Naruto kinda of girl.
My second is the Gaara/Naruto.
This story is tearing me apart,now!!
Now that Sasuke realizes how he feels about Naruto, I know that he is going to have to tell Naruto how he feels. Then you know that Naruto will always have feelings for Sasuke because its just the way he is. Argh!! But he is in love with Gaara!!! Argh!!! Why can't they just have one big sandwich with Naruto in the middle. You know what I mean, but that doesn't sound like something that Sasuke and Gaara would do.....ARGH!!
Can you tell that I love this story?!
Just wanted to give praise where praise is due.
Can't wait until you update again!!

~Shosuro~
person Gingitsune
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! You're such a sweetie for getting this chapter out so soon! :) *smuacks* Iruka is dead?! *wails* He's one of my favourite characters (I have so many in Naruto) and he's also the one that I see as being most suitable with Kakashi. No wonder why Kakashi turned into a manwhore. I'm glad though that Kakashi realises that he can love again. Although he would love again, it would be different from the love that he had shared with Iruka. However, it doesn't necessary mean that the new love is any lessor than the love that he shared wit Iruka. Just different and each unique in their way. Oh my Gosh, I have totally went off on a tangent. :P

Love this chapter. Love the fact that Sasuke has finally realised his feeling for Naruto. Now he has to decide where to go from now. Whether to try to win Naruto, or to let him go for his goal of reviving his clan.

The sign of a good story is that although it has no smut, it still captivates you and reels you in. I think that you wrote an awesome story and I hope to see more of your writing. Ja ne~
person Angelofinnocence
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far, but now I want to know what will happen. I usually like Sasu/Naru stories, but I like your's with Gaara and Naruto together. And now you've thrown Sasuke in with feelings for Naruto. Dear god, what will come of this. Update soon please!

Angel
person Kay-san
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, now I feel bad for Sasuke and Kakashi. (Even though Kakashi started out as a pervy idiot.) But I like Sakura with Kankuro and I like Naruto with Gaara. Maybe a little Sasuke/Kakashi later on? Hmmmm. Different but it could make everyone happy! Whatever you do, I'm sure it will be wonderful. Can't wait to see more! Hugs & Kisses!
person AnA La Pana83
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the 2 chapters, especially that last one with Sasuke and Kakashi chatting. Sasuke sure can be a dumbass indeed at the strangest times. I wonder what'll happen next. I really hope Sakura will give Kankouro a chance, and I love seeing Naru with Gaara, yet at the same time i like him with Sasuke. Grrr, they should probably just have one big threesome and live together lol. Wishful thinking. Anyway, tight work and update soon!
person Gingitsune
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just got back from vacation and was feeling a little down from recent events in my life. To my surprise I found this chapter waiting for me :) Love reading this chapter even though there wasn't any smut. Loved the conversation where Sakura finds out that Kankuro is waiting for her too. Now if only I could find someone like that for me. Another excellent chapter! Thank you!
person Kay-san
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH! I love it! I didn't read it for awhile since I was on a GaaSaku kick and couldn't stand the thought of Gaara with someone else. But this is just too good and I love, love, love, absolutely love the Sakura/Kankuro pairing you're doing. I've even warmed up to the Gaara/Naruto deal! Can't wait for the next update! Hugs & Kisses!