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by promise2003

person Gingitsune
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Another chapter. I really shouldn't be reading this as I have an exam in 30 mins but I couldn't resist! :P Love the interaction between Gaa and Naru, with Naru teaching Gaa what it is like to be loved. Wished that Kankuro and Sakura would get on with it :P Also hopefully Sasuke would find someone for him that he can love. Ja ne~
person Yuri-san
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:D I thought this wouldn't be updated until Nov. 2nd. Thank you for e-mailing me about it. ^^
The flash-back was a welcome addition. I was really wondering about that when I read the last chapter. Will it play an important part in the story? (Don't feel obliged to tell me, if it would spoil some part of the plot. ;P)It was a little sad though. But a story needs some sadness. (Well, it doesn't hurt to have some.) I hope Sasuke doesn't continue to close himself off. ;_;
Sakura...is sewing. 0_0 (And Naruto is her guinea pig. *giggle* Isn't he nice.) She must really need a disraction if she took up sewing.
I'm like: "Argh! Sakura!" *frustrated* "Kankuro likes you" (Okay, to her credit, she doesn't know he's serious.) "and NOW you're questioning things?!" (as opposed to Kakashi, where she didn't - not so soon, anyway.)"And, You're avoiding him!" (It really has my panties in a twist; which sounds bad, but it's not. Storys are supposed to make you feel lots of things! Hats off to you, Lemon Drops!! ^-^)
By the way; is Sakura avoiding Kankuro going to miff him? Or is he just going to be happy to see her?
Naruto, always surprising everyone with how smart he really is. But of course he's qualified or Tsunade wouldn't have given him the job. :)
It's so cute that Naruto has been taking so many trips to Suna. XD (*snicker* Little love-bunnies. XD;;;) ::Yes DEFINATELY boy on boy lemons! ;D:: Ah, Naruto's still teaching Gaara about love(making); just as when they were younger.
Yes, yes. Very nice!
~Yuri-san
person Anna
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always. Sakura's new hobby is fun, but she's making Naruto a human pin cushion! LOL it was awesome anyway, and the way Naruto kept mourning over his ripped clothes because Gaara keeps riping them, was very funny
person Anna
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo funny! And I mean the whole chapter, I can't wait for your next update, your story cheers me up every time I read it!
person Yuri-san
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh *squee* Love it! This might be my favorite chapter so far ^___^ The character dialogue and interaction was terrific! The conversation at the end, PURE WIN!
person Carla
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is Sasuke jealous? Is that why he is being such an ass even for him? Well, if they have unfinished history... Oh, who knows. Thanks for the update.
person mako-chan
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for early updates! Very nice chapter, it was very cute the way Naruto talked about his relationship with Gaara. Kankurou and Sakura are love, as always. ^___^

I hope Kankurou finds a good excuse to come visit in konoha soon! (dragging Gaara along with him, of course! XP)

Please update soon!

PS: Sasuke being an ass and getting punched by Sakura was awesome!
person CChatsworth
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know this is mainly Naruto/Gaara, but I have to thank you for the Kankuro/Sakura pairing. I love stories of those two together!!
person shadwdryuu
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please dop a lemon of sakura and kankuro, it is a very interesting pairing and id like to see what hed do with his... puppets,lol
hikage
person Carla
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to see how are they going to handle their relationship as neither has the luxiry(i didnt spell it right) of joinning the other in either village, with both being Hokages. Update soon please!