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for Hot Sand

by promise2003

person Hink
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ack! how could you do that to Sasuke? ~sobs~ evil!
person NinPao
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
do you have any idea how happy you made me when I saw the words "Part II" ?!?


*squees*

YOU ARE A GOD. A GOD!!!


A GOD!!! <3
person Lirin
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the way this has started i have no doubt it will be just as good as the original. i wait you next update. Lirin:-p
person Nessy-Chan
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I re-read the whole thing again anyway the fic was THAT gewd, hmm yumms:} It brought a smile to my face, I just love this family (in some ways...O_O) chapter...more!~_~
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was such a wonderful fic!! i love the thought of gaara and naruto adopting and getting a surrogate mother and starting their own family. i never thought of sakura and kankuro as a couple or kakashi and sauske, but somehow you made it work lol. i kinda wish there was a small sequal to this with them learning the ways of parenthood and how to be good uncles. if i was good enough to write anything i would ask if i could write a sequal myself lol. anyways awsome fic!!!
person Amanda
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jut finished reading. It was so beautiful. I read the whole thing through in one sitting!! now my eyes hurt but oh well. It was amazing, everything about it was amazing. What can i say i can't wait to read more of your work. You have an incredible writing ability, i can't wait to read more
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was soooooo good! Can you do an epilogue? Saying if they got there children, and if Sasuke and Kakashi got together more and such. Why didn't Sasuke just tell what happened? That Naruto was hallucinationg and though he was Gaara? Or maybe Naruto remember? Sasuke saw how much it hurt Gaara and Naruto, because they didn't know the truth. You have done a fantastice job with this story. Happy Writings!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holyfuck... x_x *nosebleed*

This story is GOOD! GaaNaru is love. And..... they're both seme?! xD

Lol, I used to think Gaara was the dominating type, but seeing how he's much more.. *cough reserved *cough*, I guess he needed Naruto to take the lead =)

You, should make this into a movie! x3
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The ever so stubborn Sasuke has fallen xD And boy, did he FELL hard...

I'm curious as to how this story will go from here on. :O Will Sasuke try to rape Naruto to release his lust and jealousy? Will he secretly travel to Suna to "fetch" his blond teammate? Or will he--

OKAY ENOUGH BLAHBLAH !! >_< *jumps quickly onto next page*
person jen
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i loved it how it "ended"!!!!!

lemons were great at the end!!!!!!

hey i hope there is more kankura sakura stuff!!!!

keep going!!!