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for Hot Sand

by promise2003

person Livy
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...wow, this was such a good story. I'm sad to see it end, but the ending wasn't bad I must admit.
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao they had to do that to kunkuro at the party lol, love the story, though i kindz want to know what happends to sasuke and kakashi
person Hestia
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!!! An awesome job!! What a great story and good ending! I've never managed to finish anything long, so I'm very impressed! Thanks for the this great story and all your other writings too--you write so much good stuff!
person des
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. ^_^
person Unique
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, I want to say thank for you writing this story!! I do like smexy tales, but I LOVE the ones with a believable, well told story. I can't believe I sat and read this all in one setting. I'm very impressed by how everyone still has their normal personalities, even after they've grown. Shika's short appearance was cute (I love him and his lazy ways. I wonder how's he's liking Suna and being the frist husband of the sand, by the way?). I love how you portrayed the Sand Sibs' relationship as well as the relationship between Team Kakashi. Anyway, you've definitely become one of my fav authours and I'can wait to see what else you have on this site.

Also, do you take requests?
Any Kiba/Shino stuff floating around your brain and begging to be put to paper? (Or computer, rather?)
person Stagoya
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. Sad to think it's the end. I'll just have to look forward to the epilogue and side stories.
person Fourthiv
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so sad to see this story end, it was amazing. [i actually have tears in my eyes from this] Great job!
person MeLaiya
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so sweet. If I ever get married will you write my proposal? *Sniff* absolutely beautiful, keep up the good work and update soon.
person Kay-san
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's sad that it's over, but it was a wonderful ending. And PLEASE email me when you do the epilogue or one of the side stories you mentioned. I'm definitely looking forward to some Kankuro/Sakura fun. It doesn't even have to be a lemon, they were cute as is. Loved it and the WAFF was perfectly done. Not too much, not too little. Please forgive my rambling review, it's late. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. (Now get to work on "Taking Kakashi's Virginity"!!!!) Hugs & Kisses!
person Arien
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Really love your fic! I use to write on mediaminer before they went and banned my sister and I for some reason. They never even told us why. Any way love the story and happy i can read more!