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for Hot Sand

by promise2003

person Geppe
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;.; *le tear!* I spent the pest few days reading the story...TIS BEAUTIFUL! This fic has me completelt sold on the gaaranaru pairing. <3 *loves you to death*
BUT!....What about the honeymoon? -.^
person harlita
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh shi-


I cried.

YOU MADE ME CRY!!!!


BRILLIANT!!! **APPLAUSE**
person forgetfulrose91
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T.T I'M JUST SO HAPPY FOR THEM...!!! T.T T.T T.T

This was by far...one of the best fanfictions I've ever read in my entire life! No. Really...It was awesome! Even BEYOND awesome...! (((Loves jealous Gaara!)))
person Mindingmybusiness
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I'm all misty-eyed. That was beautifully done. I just love the way you write!! This story was AWESOME! Wonderful. Truly!
person AnA La PaNa83
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, i feel sooo COMPLETE now lol. Anyway, it was worth the wait! I can't wait for the epilogue and the other stories. I'll keep an eye out for that. It's been fun keeping up with this story.
person oztan
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is was so good. Can not believe its the end. If you are going to write any more Kakashi/Sasuke fictions, please email me.

Great story!
person Randi
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Beautiful... just beautiful..
person Yuri-san
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG *bawls* it's over! (Well, technically... or, NOT technically... whatever.) I'm so happy, ^_^ but it's bittersweet... BAH! Story endings: too many feelings. ;P
Naruto and Gaara made up! ^3^ (I just knew they would, but it's nice to see how.)
You wrapped up the Sasuke and Kakashi stuff nicely. :D (I still say those two are idiots.XP At least they will be idiots together now.XD)
The bachelor party was hilarious. XD Kankuro's so squeemish about Naruto and Gaara being touchy-feely; it's kinda cute. ...Of course, Naruto and Gaara were a wee bit more than JUST touch-feely; I'm not sure even I would want to see THAT behind a bar... Oh, who am I kidding-- of course I would! XD;;; (tee, hee) That image broke my brain for a second, and I exclaimed, "OH MY GOSH!" OoO (I may have freaked someone out in the next room. ^^;;;)
The wedding was super-sweet! ^.^ Naruto probably could find a way to marry a guy --I wouldn't want to stand in his way. The kiss was ALSO super-sweet! Gah! *grabs a tissue* They're so sweet and lovey together! C;
And, the lemon: BEST way EVER to get rid of pre-wedding jitters! CX ...At least for us readers.^-^
Just...AWSOMELY GRAND KUDOS FOR THE WHOLE STORY!!!! ^______________^









person Cindy
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful wedding chapter~! So romantic. :) Happy to hear there is a bit more to come. I was also glad to see Naruto get someone who is actually nice to him (Sasuke is sexy as hell but he is a teme right).
person harlita
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*big watery eyes*


pp...please update.... my favorite fic here.... i check... everyday... i hope.. new chapter... probably last chapter... i cry and cry.. but..


ppppp......*bwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! *sniff... sniff...*

please... update... *shudders and holds herself in the dark of the corner..... *