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for Hot Sand

by promise2003

person oztan
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. I love how Sasuke/Kakashi are paired up.

Can not wait for the next chapter.
person Stagoya
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I haven't been able to be on in awhile. Glad I checked. I'm sad to see that the story is coming to a close, but I love that Gaara isn't holding a grudge to Naruto. I was afraid that he would. ^^;
person LonelyDove89
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update Update!!!!!!!
person Yuri-san
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boo, finals! >8/ ...But now they're over. Yay! ^^
*loves chapter* Thanks for writing it even though it was hard. =^_^= <3
person Jen
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA!! oh i´m so happy andi have been waiting for this chapter so long!!!

gaara and naruto!!!! i´m gladyou didn´t let sasuke spoil it!!!!!

keep going even though the end is nar, and it´s sad, you will be very happy and so will we!!!!!
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on Sasuke, stop being so thickheaded. You know you want Kakashi.

Still love your story, although Gaara's turnaround was weirdly abrupt. Well, not really. He was relieved to see him alive. I'd be mad at him, though. Just a little.

Waiting for an update.
person Charisa
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh. Love this! :P
person severedwings
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sighs deeply*...wow, this...is wonderful. I love the story line and the different twists you write in. And hot damn...you can do one mean sex scene...LOL. I look forward to the next update....even though it's drawing the story that closer to it's end.

Thanks for sharing,
Kurai
person cloudydayz
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Wonderful. Great work! I actually like this kaka/sasu. I usually hate this pairing, but this is good. To be honest, I like them more than the naru/gara bit.
person harlita
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! I don't want it to end!! OMG

You write such a good story!! You have totally sold me on NarutoxGaara!!! LOVE FOR YOU!!