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by promise2003

person Anna
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're been mean again!
Ohhh well, I hope you make up to all of them later on...
person LonelyDove89
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really really really really really like this story!!!
person Mako-chan
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Thank God for my lazy (and a bit obsessed) ass! Was supposed to be working but checked for updates instead. This chapter REALLY tugged at my heartstrings, I had to hold back the tears because I'm at the office. ^^;;
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does that mean its almost over? That's kind of sad. I knew you wouldn't kill Naruto. Please, make it a happy ending? Naruto has Gaara, Sasuke has Kakashi, and everything can be okay.
person Fourthiv
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really are an updating machine. This chapter was really good, to be honest. I'm very excited to read more!
person Stagoya
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah, I was actually crying by this. (Who says boys aren't allowed to cry? *glares*) I so hope that everything ends well, but I'm gonna stay with this no matter what turns this takes. From here I can see it going two ways and while I like one way a lot better, I won't mind the other either. So I hope the next chaptre is updated quickly. (Though, the chaptres have been coming out incredibly fast and I don't wanna push my luck. ^^;)
person Donedin
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAHH!! I want to know what is going to happen with Gaara and Naruto!! Will they find out what really happend!? O.o can't wait for next chappy.. gotta know!! This is getting soo good. Cant't wait for the next update! ^_^
person anessa
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what the hell? thats it? omg and I was expecting many many stuff oh men but the chapter was still gewd:D
person Hestia
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow--I last read when Naruto was planning the proposal and now there is so much new here--wow! I'm glad Sasuke's near death got Kakashi to figure out he was in love. I'm still worried about Gaara and Naruto, but I have faith that you will fulfill your promise of a happy ending. Gosh--I don't know what all to comment on. Poor Sasuke! He's really suffering. I loved the letter from Naruto to Gaara--that was awesome, especially the burnt egg bit. Well, great stuff as usual! Thanks!
person Shadow2008
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gaara... I hope he finds out the truth ._. HE better *shakes Fists* or ill cry T-T