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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome awesome. the kunai added to it was definitely something i had not heard of even thought of. points to you lol.
loved the writing. though i must say....i rather like narusaku lol.
keep writing!!!
loved the writing. though i must say....i rather like narusaku lol.
keep writing!!!
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, at times its hard to read because of constant smut and thoughts about " when will she end up pregnant" but over all its quite a good series ^^
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 and the sex with Naruto up against the wall was the best! Always my favorite description and you write it very well. They were both very in the moment, and it was tender and loving, just awesome! Really liking your Naruto stories, and it makes me hope you write Bleach stuff too! ^__^ Thanks!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG chapter 5 ~ Kakashi knows!! Can't wait to read the rest!! *clapping*
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I would like a 3-some of the Naruto characters, but I do! Good job with the 1st chapter, I can't wait to read more. I would also like to post links to fan artwork of how I was picturing the older Team 7. Not sure if you have seen these before, but beautiful artwork should always be shared! *thumbs up* Also the images and the images in your story make a great impact for me when reading! *clapping* Thanks, going to read the rest!
http://sakimichan.deviantart.com/art/up-against-the-wall-85495817
http://sakimichan.deviantart.com/art/Sakura-love-me-73741096
http://sakimichan.deviantart.com/art/up-against-the-wall-85495817
http://sakimichan.deviantart.com/art/Sakura-love-me-73741096
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job!
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic! I noticed a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing major.
It was very sweet and very sexy all at the same time. I'm super impressed that you were able to balance the, um, "sex" part of it with the "sweet" part, because either without the other wouldn't have been half as good. I would have liked to see maybe just one more chapter, not necessarily lemony, where the whole team (Kakashi included) goes on some mission, so that we could see exactly how their new closeness works. I also would have liked to see Kakashi's acknowledgment of the situation and their improved teamwork, as well as his reaction to it. I think I would probably die squealing if I got to be a fly on the wall for a whole-team discussion of the new situation, and that's the only thing the story really leaves me craving. :)
Again, AWESOME job!
It was very sweet and very sexy all at the same time. I'm super impressed that you were able to balance the, um, "sex" part of it with the "sweet" part, because either without the other wouldn't have been half as good. I would have liked to see maybe just one more chapter, not necessarily lemony, where the whole team (Kakashi included) goes on some mission, so that we could see exactly how their new closeness works. I also would have liked to see Kakashi's acknowledgment of the situation and their improved teamwork, as well as his reaction to it. I think I would probably die squealing if I got to be a fly on the wall for a whole-team discussion of the new situation, and that's the only thing the story really leaves me craving. :)
Again, AWESOME job!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am not one to read these, especially if Sasuke is involved...I don't like him. Anyway, it worked and it was just awesome. It gave me ideas....
Excellent writing! Keep up the good work on future ones!
Excellent writing! Keep up the good work on future ones!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really want to write a sequel for this but my god you set the bar higher than...I don't even know. It was a pleasure to read this.
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely wonderful! great length too. very satisfying i must say. like what the others have said, thanks for keeping this yaoi-free. i also love the idea that they really really love her. i guess it's just in-character for sasuke to deny his feelings & it's good that naruto knows what he really feels deep inside for sakura; thank you for letting your hopelessly-romantic readers know that :) i suppose it is just in-character too for sakura not to say 'i love you' to naruto, but at least she knows & she seems to love him even as well even if she didn't say it; her crying simply implies it. another thing, you just described naruto here in a whole different light! perhaps in the near naruto future he really is going to look as charming as sasuke *crosses fingers*