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Besides many spelling errors (like: chakra not chakura, and Shizune not Shizume)Wow...just fucking amazing. That scence with the mirror was awesome.

OMG!! Naruto and Sakura very very very hot and kinky!!! I can't wait to see what Sakura has in store for him!! Still the best fic on the site!!

ok..fourth comment this week but deal with it; its important and here it is: PLEASE..i repeat, PLEASE, DO-NOT turn this into a yaoi of ANY kind..iv seen soo many fanfictions that start off soooo good like yours and completely go flop when the author receives divine intervention and thinks up the brilliant idea to make naruto and sasuke soo ooc that they confess their undying love for each other and have crazy man sex..nd sakura gets left in the rain..its terribly corny and not something you would ever write but still..please dont, itll prolly ruin the story(not that im against crazy man sex but this IS a narusakusasu right? not narusasusaku..i always figured the person in the middle is always the mutual one..)

it is good! I guess my only dilemma is that they don't love eachother. Does that mean Naruto also just wants ass and no relationship? I like the love with the three of them, but i'm okay with reading this story even if they just lust for eachother. can't wait to see the next chap!

I luv the SasuSaku chapter.I hope u make more of it.I have nothing against the threesome,just i'm more into sasusaku,but I want u to make more threesome chap!

please tell me it goes on. I think this is one of the best threesomes that I have read.

I love how you portray Naruto. For once, his character beats Sasuke's to pieces! *sigh* Sakura is sure a lucky girl in here. Very well done! Hope to read the NaruSaku chapter soon!

ok..so now, sasuke is officially one up on naruto..im guessing the next chapter is a narusaku chapter and thats not cuz i read what yu wrote at the end of the chapter either ;D Ok..so heres the plan...yur gona continue to write smutty sex stories in every one of these chapters nd party of three will be known as the smuttiest fanfiction in fanfiction history ever written..so far yu'v got about 5 or so lemons and according to all the smut iv read, thats the most in one story so keep on going! yur gona break the record for story with most consecutive lemons (current winner i have no clue of) and be WORLD REKNOWN! sp? so there yu go for 'where this story's going' KEEP UPDATING! oh..and if yu need ideas, feel free to ask..im sure EVERYONE on this site chip in with some erotic ideas

ok..now me when im not controlled by my inner hentai demon..great chapter, i like how instead of ending the story completely based on sex you'v thickened the plot. Sasuke's suggestion on keeping emotions out of sex allows you numerous ways to branch out into a completely well developed, and entertaining story. I like how you portrayed sakuras desires and raw lust for her two teamates. very visual, very appealing. Also, it may be alittle ooc, but i completely approve of sasukes caring demeanor..its like a breath of fresh air, please keep him like that. It was really sweet..but then again, i WOULD like to see him just a little more rough and domineering in the sack but it looks like the hentai demon's reared its ugly head..oh well

ps: H.D wants to know what exactly sasuke whispered into sakuras ears..cuz he's been thinking of alot of possible answers (my hentai demons a guy even tho im a girl..but hes bi..i think..i just cant imagine a real girl sayin the thinks he does) ;P

thank you soo much for updating...i love this story. when my friend gave this site, Party of tree was the first fan-fic i read and i was waiting for u to updsate so thank you. the story is great!!