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for Party of Three

by emeraldfire84

person me
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok..yeah, i kno iv reviewed like...3 times already but heres the deal..yur gona write this chpater right..preferable soon and after naruto gets done with sakura and it gona be about sakura bein all badass and in charge-like k? i kno im probably not the first to recommend that but seriously..let sakura think up a brilliant plan that involves an abandoned factory, a tight leather outfit, naruto and sasuke tied to a chair and ill mannered use of the kage bunshin no jutsu(ya kno, just so one of them doesnt get left out). is that brilliant or WHAT! dont get me wrong, i like my guys controlling and everything but once in a while its nice to see a woman take charge, and with sakuras freakish human strength who KNOWS what she can do..MUAH HAHAHAHHA!
person Jenny
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!! So far your story is the only DETAILED story i've read so far! The others are just so BRIEF! I love you, who ever you are! PLEASE UPLOAD MORE!!
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THANKZ FOR ANOTHER CHAPATER CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONES WHERE DOES KAKASHI COME IN??
person morwen re
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! i had thought that the fourth chapter was going to be the last one, but i'm so glad that i kept checking anyways! nice depiction of sasuke, by the way, he's not too sappy or grumpy(don't know how to describe him when he's overly him...) and i can't wait to read the naruto chapter! cha! ja ne!
person ishanatur
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-snickers- man that really does take the term teamwork to a whole new relationship. nice on the sasu/saku chappie and i'm betting naruto is really gonna take her on the ride of her sex life when he gets back. lol.
person LEEANN
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY BEEN ENJOYING THIS TORY REALLY NICE DETAIL. IT BE NICE IF THE THREE OF THEM END UP AS MORE THAN JUST FREINDS WITH BEIFITS. MAYBE THE THREE CAN HELP REBUILD THE UCHIA CLAN.
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Chapter 5. It's the best Sasuke/Sakura scene I've read and the whole story is now one of my favorites. Thank you for adding more chapters!
person a
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was so hot!!! i know that it seems you're going in the opposite direction, but i think the only thing hotter than a 3 way with sakura, naruto, and sasuke is a team seven 4-way! kakashi is still part of the team... poor guy must feel left out! c'mon, sakura's a kunoichi, she can handle it!!! keep up the good work!!
person akasha
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry... kinda forgot to type my name there *blushes*