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i DEFINATELY think yu should make a sequel..ya kno..with a more intense lemon..cuz right now, yuv left me hanging and im still waiting for more

not that this lemon wasnt intense, cuz it was the best lemon in the history of lemons

Gyaddamn. That was amazing. You're now my new fave lemon writer.

Jesus CHRIST! that was the best smut fic i have ever read...EVER! oh my god you are a smut genius! YOU should be writing the icha icha series, my god, i dont think there was a turn-off scene in there! and every time i finished a page and saw next chapter i did a little jig haha. you write so well, you most certainly know how to 'capture the moment' -- i'm kinda torn about the adding kakashi thing - i mean i do indeed want you to continue and yesm, kakashi is indeed one hell of a man (giggle) and i do support kakasaku, but, idk i felt some sort of deeper connection between the three that makes it sort of less meaningful if another were to be added to the thro. but, as you are the author and have constructed thus far an incredible story, i trust you completely - cuz we all know kaka-sensei is a mad hottie hehe.
once again, FANTASTIC job.
i really hope you continue!

Muahahaha, Kakashi with them, hmm? >:3 That would be interesting...


That was hot <3 Yum yum

this is the best story on aff. there's nothing better.
great job and i hope you update soon.

Oh. My. God. This story is so damn sexy!!! God, I just.. I.. INTRODUCE KAKASHI!!! -clamps hand over mouth- Oops..... My emotions got carried away. >.< Anyway, this story is just hot!!!

On the standpoint of introducing Kakashi, it'll be hot. Definitely. But realistically, the way things are moving for this story, it's not realistic (but you, being a smut writing genius, will probably find a way to defind all odds. Mean that as a compliment!). I can't see Naruto and Sasuke sharing Sakura, even with their sensei. Plus, Kakashi is around 15 or so years older. You can't forget that! Plus, I imagine it's hard to write Smutty!Kakashi wihtout him seeming OOC. Won't it be nice to write a giggling school girl Kakashi having sex with a screaming sakura without getting sued by fans?

However, you can take it as a challenge. In fact, if you can do it, more power to you! You;re officially a smut writing God!

Anyway, this is a great story. Well writen. The characters act in a way that I can actually imagine it all happening! It's that good. =P Keep up the amazing work!

Not quite the porniest thing I've ever read, but close. 'Tis only second to Teamwork - The Night. Great writing, and there had better be a sequel!

That was some of the best smut I've ever read, threesomes can be hard and to make it all work it was amazing. You don't need to add Kakashi personally I think it would be awkward with their teacher, why not give Kakashi his own seperate story.

introducing kakashi? you're kidding right? that's just... crazy. it'd be interesting how you manage THAT but... it'll be a challenge... >_> anywho. yeah. for the most part, it was hot. but seriously. quoting sakura: "haven't you boys had enough?!" or whatever it was she said. XD DAMN. oh. and i'm a SasuNaruSasu fan... so the whole thing with Naruto being emotionally attached to Sakura annoyed me JUST a little. but I'll let it slide. it was strangely satisfying for four chapters of pure and intense smut.

my only problem is... i read it all in one sitting. =__=

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