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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dirtyyy dirtyyy smuttt....yur a dirrrty dirrrty smut author! but i love yu and keep it comin' nd soon too..
love always, dirrtty dirrty smut fan
love always, dirrtty dirrty smut fan
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a virgin, you say? Good grief, girl! You're a natural. Very nice job, everyone in character, and nice and steamy. I only noticed one misspelling -- "you're" for "your", but that's it. Very nice, looking forward to more.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! HOT! MORE!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another goodie! :) I really, really enjoyed this and I'm totally looking forward to more! As for your line "It’s pretty pathetic so much sex comes from the mind of a virgin..." Hey, everyone needs SOME kind of outlet. Your present 'innocent state' didn't show in your writing, so I wouldn't worry about it. Plus it won't necessarily get any easier to quell those thoughts later either, experience speaking here. Just have fun and keep writing amazing little fantasies for us, m'kay? :)
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this team 7 fiction! Excellent stuff! Damn, that lucky Sakura! Looking forward to more chapters--great job!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I love everything about it! luck luck Sakura
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! You are very talented!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's very good, really!!! You are an amazing author!!!!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You honestly write the best lemons. In this story we have a sexy whimpering sasuke. In one of your other stories we have a squirming kakashi. Its all sooooo HOTT!!! please update soon!!
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man I really wish you WOULD have posted it all at once. I can't wait to see what happens. So far I'm liking this one WAY more than my own 'Team 7 gets drunk and then does dirty things to each other' fic. Can't wait to see more!