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for Party of Three

by emeraldfire84

person ronsmyhero
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haven't had much time to do anything as of late, but I'm glad I had time to read this!

I Loved it! I really liked how (so far) its two straight dudes with a girl. (Not that I'm not a fan of yaoi, mind you.) but I like it this way. Just two guy friends helping out their female friend. So nice with Sasuke being all dirty and tender! I love your Naruto in it as well. Ah, the chiseled chest! LOL, after reading the manga (waterfall scene) that little whiskered kid's gonna grow up to be a hottie! Loved this. Great job.
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the steamiest stories that I have read in a long time...and you haven't even made it to the main event yet. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are a fabulous writer and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
person aoshi4misao
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
***Pant Pant, part II, please please post it soon! This was,is, will be, one of the best threesome team seven fics I've read. Great job so far, and I'll be looking for part two.
person Tsukashi
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Team 7 is OT3 luv!! ^___^ Awesome job! As usual, I really like your writing! I look forward to part 2. I'd also like to make a request, if I may be so bold. I've got one in the works myself(which, knowing me, will take months to finish), but I wanna read someone else's Team Kakashi Naru/Saku/Sai fic.
person koinuchan9
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I mean...wow. That was hott and you didn't even get to the best part yet...damn you are good. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Nice touch at the end with Sakura's uncertain feelings, it adds depth and is something she would feel. Nicely done my friend, nicely done. Eagerly awaiting the next chappie!
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was quite awesome! I like how you convey Sakura's uncertainty and her hesitation, it really brings out the character as a whole. The boys were also really well done, in that they don't push her into doing it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person Random Crazy Person
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLease update soon. You write amazing lemons and they are the best!!
person mel
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I really liked it, and I can't wait til the next chapter. Good job!