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for Party of Three

by emeraldfire84

person nika
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaa *o*

I've never ever thought about a sasunarusaku...but you really did me fond of! ^^
Keep writting fanfics please!
person SungawdRa
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.....uh... WOW.

I set out this morning to find a decent, well-written Naruto lemon fanfic, and by some miracle, I stumbled across this.

Not only was this well written, and HOT, it also involved a threesome that didn't really go into Yaoi (to each their own) territory. A rarity in fics about my favorite group, but welcomed nonetheless.

I'm going to make a point to read all of your fics (even pairings I don't normally read), and hope for many more fics in the future. Especially if you get the urge to, say... write another Team 7 oneshot like this. ^_^

....Seriously. This was lighthearted, kinda sweet, and very smexy. Great Job.
person one_razan
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you posting on fanfiction.net? I randomly came across your story under a different pen name and title, and before I jumped to conclusions, I wanted to make sure you weren't publishing your story under a new name. The name of the author on fanfiction.net is Mikami Naru and the story is retitled "The Team 7 Effect". Here is the link, it was posted recently: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3740752/1/The_Team_7_Effect If you are fully aware of this, my apologies for butting my nose in where it doesn't belong; I just appreciate good, original works and it pisses me off when people steal other people's ideas and pass them off as their own, getting credit they never even worked for. Peace.
person KitschDoll
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sexual frustration is one of the greatest spices. ;)
person Saitochan
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I can barely believe my eyes! 7 Chapters? more than 20 pages each? phew! Here I was, just looking for something to waste my (not so precious) time, and I found this! (Actually, I haven't even finished reading the first chapter yet, but just give me a few hours...) Anyway, it's looking good! For what I've read so far, you write quite well. Where can I found more?
person nlightnd
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I absolutely LOVE your story!!! I can't tell you how many times I've read it and I keep coming back for more!!! I think you managed a great balance between Naruto/Sakura/Sasuke and the sex that ensued. I was curious, however, to see if there'd be any type of sequel to see who'd finally end up with whom. Although, you did leave it at a great place regardless. Your story was so hot...it affected me greatly to say the least. Party of Three is definitely, without question,my most favorite story on all of adult fanfic! So thank you so much for the wonderfully written smut! It kicked ass!!! Keep writing.
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGeez, that was one of the best stories I've read! And definitely the best threesome I've read. That was freakin' awesome!! XD
You write beautifully, EXCELLENTLY! I was laughing at some of those stories (that story with Ino's team was hilarious XD ); I love it when Naruto gets on Sasuke's nerves and when Sasuke talks dirty. Sakura is SO DARN LUCKY!! It's no fair! No--fair, I tell ya!
Man, I loved it so much, I wish it wasn't over. It was sooo COOL! :D There really should be a sequel.
One last thing.... This is the first Naruto fanfic I've read that didn't have any yaoi. I don't read that many non-yaoi fics, and when I started to look at this story, I was expecting some. Nevertheless... I'm not disappointed in the slightest! XD (And it wasn't because of that part in the last chapter; that was just a bonus. =D> I'm also not into toys or objects, but that was cool. ^_^
In short... I FREAKIN' LOVED IT!!!
person poornmiserable
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love you and this fic, great job as always
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am In Love with this story
person plaawlod
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic. I hope to read more of your works