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for Party of Three

by emeraldfire84

person raefire
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!! I couldn't believed you finally update, THE WAIT WAS SO WORTH IT!!!
Hot & Kinky, but it can't be over!!!
person Chi
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
simply awesome. loved every chapter of it, really, really great and sexy story.
person Mageblood
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SO much could be done with this story!!!!!
I am very sad to see it end especially since you are a very excellent story teller!!!!!!!!!!!
But this story is worth every ounce of love!!!!!!!!!!
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As awesome as it is to see the final installment of the story, I think you should know that you didn't quite get all of your beta's notes out of the body of the text. XD

Aside from that, it was really fun. I was wondering when that trick with the ice cubes and kunai was going to show up! Also, the way she handled the boys was very hot. And now...I sleep. Huzzah! Xd
person MooMooCow
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant! The end to a great story! Luved it! Can't wait to see ur other updates
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow That was one hell of a smut fest. Thank you it was great.
person me
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't tell you how utterly depressed i am that this is ending..im seriously about to cry..but not realy, if i was a lesser person maybe but anyways..iv loved this story since day one and i admire you for your writing ability (not just smut) and think that your amazing. It's kind of sad to think that everytime i look for an update of Party of Three it'll already be finished..kinda throws off my routine, but you must be so happy to finich this. Well, remember, your an amazing author, you write smut better than anyone on the internet, and an extremely creative person. (Kinky too..i mean, ice and kunai..sounds kinda scary but hey, whatever floats your boat) I kinda want to make you an award...ill think about it...im not sure how but ill try! Anyways, i figured what you had sakura do was the dominatrix stuff right? i was kinda hoping for something much more painful but this was fun too! Anyways, i hope one day you'll get struck with an idea for a sequel because party of three just wouldnt be party of three without J-Pop hime as the author..I'd personally consider anyone that writes a sequel for POT thats not yu an enemy..oh well, good luck with yur other fanfics!

Your forever loyal fan,

me
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so sweet...AND SO HOTT!!! You have this awesome talent for writing, you know that? Keep up the good work, and I look forward to more updates in your other stories.
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's me, uzumakihinata! Thank you for the praise, I'm so glad I could help! Keep up the great work with "Gossip"!
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm, very smutty, yummy too. Not much I can say. I am in awe.