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I can't believe that I missed part 5...so I had two chapters to catch up and on wow...steamy sexy fun was had with the members of Team 7 in those chapters. I'm not sure why I didn't love the Sasuke and Sakura pairing (I think its because it isn't as absolutely adorable as Naruto who's in love with her *sqee!*), but I DEFINITELY loved the last chapter. I want those two crazy kids to end up together so much in this story, you have no idea how much I've been cheering Naruto on. Anywhoosits, I loved your story as always, and your fic still leaves my mind numb for hours after reading it.

WOW HOT BUT WHERE IS KAKASHI???
YOU ARE A AWESOME WRITER. BUT WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE YOUR OTHER STORY A LITTLE LIGHT READING???

well... what can i say? this story is still the best on the site and... keep up the good work! your thanksgiving vacation was well spent, good job!

What I said still stands now. Naruto's character here beats Sasuke to pieces! (sigh) How... Just how did you do it to make the guy (who has never been my favorite characters exactly) to be so loving and at the same time damned sexy? I am very, very happy with this chapter. Thank you. So much. I hope you will write more of them, Narusaku, in the future. By the way, I find your Shikamaru to be very cute. Now, Shikamaru is my favorite character and... well, (giggle) I can only wish that he will end up with someone soon and swallow every word that he has said about women. Many people pair him up with either Temari or Ino (curiously enough that both of them are blond) but I rather that he ends up with someone else for some reasons...
Oh well.
I'm looking forward to reading all your works. So update soon!

Whoo. Great chapter. You know, I like Naruto and Sakura a lot more then Sasuke and Sakura. Naruto is just, well, nicer and that makes everything better. I wonder if Sakura is going to fall for Naruto in this story, too? I hope so, Naruto is such a sweetie he deserves it. :) And he could make her a lot happier.
That being said, please don`t think I`m trying to tell you how to write your fic; it`s YOUR fic and as a reader I`m just along for the ride. I`m just trying to say why chapter 6 is my favorite so far. And it really makes me look forward to what Sakura winds up coming up with...heh.
Good luck with your school papers!

I read this before but it keeps getting better. You're an awesome writer, nose bleeds everywhere!

i am HONORED to have this chapter dedicated to me..i think i might just cry..nah, but wow, good chapter: nice, long, satisfying..haha, im being dirty again! i cant wait until the next chapter that im SURE will be a threesome right? lol, good to kno im not the only fangirl that doesnt dig the whole man on man fics, they sorta make me shiver..brr, well, i cant wait, update soon, think about that one idea if proposed *wink wink*, and good luck on all yur papers for finals!

ps: nah, i guess it wasnt TOO much of a disappointment when Let me in's chapter had no lemon.just make sure to make it up to us in the next one k? k.

pss: Ya kno..PERSONALLY, i thought naruto and sakuras lemon was very tame, not that it did get me off or wasnt completely kinky because believe me, it was..i duno, maybe its just me and liking rough sex..but damn, the mirror? THAT..was hott..OH! and what naruto did in public, i was stuck in between yelling at his to get his hand outta there or yellin at sakura to just jump his bones already! (secretly i was more into the jump his bones idea, but my "outter sakura" side wouldnt allow it) you'v gotta have them hav sex someone public! The Danger! The Excitement! The YOUTHFULNESS! uh..yeah, i dont kno how that slipped out..so yeah..

psss: My smart side would once again like to congradulate you on yur spectacular job of portraying the characters and their emotions. You have a wide vocabulary and kno which words to use and when. Once again, visual, mind blowing, and keeps me on the endge of my seat waiting for more

pssss: yea, i am pretty mysterious arnt i?

the best fic on this site. Great work, I hope there will be more from you