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for Nobody Move

by BishounenKrazed

schedule October 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It would be great if you still have a copy of this story and could reupload it again. I am not sure if I would be allowed to leave a review here again on the same story but if it doesn't work, I can leave a comment on AO3 on one of your other stories.

person Kira
schedule October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I don't know what happened when you edited it, but the whole story is gone after the first paragraph! I haven't read this in years and was really looking forward to rereading it! D:

schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad! So incredibly sad..
I feel my heart breaking for all of them, but strangely, mostly for Tsunade.
She might have been drunk, but those words were true.
Poor poor Sasuke.. You go tell them!
Thank you veyr much for this fic, it was touching and moving.
A little bit of character-death can give us a perspective on them: Why are they important?
person hsbs
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The interesting angle here is that, in the manga, it could happen! And Naruto might be consumed by the demon to protect the village!

...Only now we know it may be Sasuke he has to protect the village from......402 spoiler
person gaara89
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. I really do like your stories. I hope to see more from you soon.
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh... every time i read this it hits me all over again. it's so sad. i actually skipped the lemon for the angsty pieces. it's so powerful. you did a great job. way to go.~
person Chris
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just had to leave a note on this. Very powerful story. I found myself tearing up several times, just being able to imagine the pain and loss they were feeling. The guilt, the fear, the hatred, the worry, and above all the love. Thank you. :)
person lonelylulaby
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was sad, but strangely I liked it. It seemed like it could seriously happen. And Tsunade being drunk and saying all the things that were true. That was kewl. The title was what cought my attention and then having 'Nobody Move' at intervels w/ different descriptions, I liked that alot.

ja ne
person setsue
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! this kicks ass!! i love it so much. i haven't seen one this good that was only one chapter in a long time. major gudos!!
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You kow, I got online to read a few more nice Naruto fics and relax after a looong day. Now I sit here, crying my eyes out and cannot believe that you wrote this...It's so beautiful and sad...and beautiful...and saaaad...waahhhh *runs off to get a handkerchief*