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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
goodness. this is just... *takes back kleenex* this is incredible.
the way you wrote them, both of them, was amazing. of course, there's nothing surprising about that, but still, you did a beautiful job with this. you captured their emotions, playing them both, all of them like violins and what beautiful music you made.
and as much as i love a good smut scene in any story, i think it added to the poignancy of this one to have the smut non-existent, merely alluded to, you know? the fact that sasuke gave into naruto is also something is quite keeping in their characters.
this is so moving, very sad and beautiful. you did an amazing job with this story and i'm torn at how much sasuke loved naruto. and i really loved the added dimension of reality when sasuke commanded the villagers to stay, to meet the very man they had hated so very much, the savior of the village and their hero. it added to the pain in my chest as i read through this. amazing. beautiful and sad and wonderfully well written, like everything you've done.
until the next time!
~hanyou-elf
*sniffles*
the way you wrote them, both of them, was amazing. of course, there's nothing surprising about that, but still, you did a beautiful job with this. you captured their emotions, playing them both, all of them like violins and what beautiful music you made.
and as much as i love a good smut scene in any story, i think it added to the poignancy of this one to have the smut non-existent, merely alluded to, you know? the fact that sasuke gave into naruto is also something is quite keeping in their characters.
this is so moving, very sad and beautiful. you did an amazing job with this story and i'm torn at how much sasuke loved naruto. and i really loved the added dimension of reality when sasuke commanded the villagers to stay, to meet the very man they had hated so very much, the savior of the village and their hero. it added to the pain in my chest as i read through this. amazing. beautiful and sad and wonderfully well written, like everything you've done.
until the next time!
~hanyou-elf
*sniffles*
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*speachless*
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gawd...i liked so much!
i had to fight back tears...i really loved
thank you for sharing, it was a lovely story
xxx
i had to fight back tears...i really loved
thank you for sharing, it was a lovely story
xxx
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww it was bittersweet sad, but written beautifully. I admire you so much.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh that was sad. I have tears in my eyes and all that sentimental crap. How could you write this? It was so good, but I get all upset when I have to kill off any of my fave characters. DAH!! You have me freaking out on this.
I loved it all, beginning to end. Naruto was so anxious, I thought at first, "Ah, he's just hard up for sex" but then I read more and I was like "Why couldn't he just be hard up for sex?!?"
This was very nice. Well written with an original plot and stirring themes. Namely you made me cry. At the end I was still drinking my coke but I had tears all over the lid of the can. And I was very pleased at the end when Tsunade was talking, and shaming the villagers. I was like "Yes! You tell those scummy bitches how crappy and stupid they really are!!" I was very satisfied with it. Good closure. I was kind of hoping for her to go on a rampage, but that would kind of ruin the effect of the story. So her bad-mouthing the moronic villagers was good. And yay Kakashi for more or less saying "Get the fuck out of here". Someone had to do it, and I am glad it was him.
But ohh!! Sasuke! I felt so bad for him. Because he finally knew how much he loved Naruto but he also knew what Naruto meant to do but he couldn't do anything about it and was helpless and that made me so frustrated! And I liked also, how you said "Nobody move" repeatedly. I found that very effective, especially when Sasuke said it at the end as well.
Naruto was a hero, he has a great legacy to leave behind, and Konoha will suffer because of it. That's what I say. I don't know how to close this so I'll say Kudos to you, and Ta for now.
I loved it all, beginning to end. Naruto was so anxious, I thought at first, "Ah, he's just hard up for sex" but then I read more and I was like "Why couldn't he just be hard up for sex?!?"
This was very nice. Well written with an original plot and stirring themes. Namely you made me cry. At the end I was still drinking my coke but I had tears all over the lid of the can. And I was very pleased at the end when Tsunade was talking, and shaming the villagers. I was like "Yes! You tell those scummy bitches how crappy and stupid they really are!!" I was very satisfied with it. Good closure. I was kind of hoping for her to go on a rampage, but that would kind of ruin the effect of the story. So her bad-mouthing the moronic villagers was good. And yay Kakashi for more or less saying "Get the fuck out of here". Someone had to do it, and I am glad it was him.
But ohh!! Sasuke! I felt so bad for him. Because he finally knew how much he loved Naruto but he also knew what Naruto meant to do but he couldn't do anything about it and was helpless and that made me so frustrated! And I liked also, how you said "Nobody move" repeatedly. I found that very effective, especially when Sasuke said it at the end as well.
Naruto was a hero, he has a great legacy to leave behind, and Konoha will suffer because of it. That's what I say. I don't know how to close this so I'll say Kudos to you, and Ta for now.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was so sad!! But it's hard to be depressed for long with the freakin' gay erotica ads from AFF.net running. AH! ;o; It was wonderful~
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would have to say that this story is now up there with only two other stories that have moved me to the point that I was choked up and teary eyed. I liked the way you used "Nobody Move" through out the whole story, even though the reader doesn't know what it means until the end. I like the way you had the love scene in there but it was not overly done. Overall I just wanted to let you know that this story was a heart wrencher to read and I will have it on my all time heart breaking Naruto stories.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~wipes tears from corner of eyes~
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~wipes tears from corner of eyes~
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah gez, this wasn't the most saddest SasuNaru fic I've read... but it still got me near to tears. This fic is really beautiful, yet sad. Bravo!
KnT
KnT
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2 words can describe this piece of art.
Beautifull, and Sad...
What made more painfull, was that Naruto knew the end was coming. Sasuke, found out at the same time... Painful, Beautifull and Sad.
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And I really want to kill you for doing this... (cries)
Beautifull, and Sad...
What made more painfull, was that Naruto knew the end was coming. Sasuke, found out at the same time... Painful, Beautifull and Sad.
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And I really want to kill you for doing this... (cries)
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad monkeys...lots of sad crying monkeys. They are like evil flying monkeys, but they just sit there and pout and cry at the VERY sad fanfics that I force myself to read because they are beautiful and well done. Darn you and your well-written stories, now I have to bookmark you so I can read the rest (because I sadly don't have time at the moment to sit and read...which is the real reason why I'm pouting).
Really lovely one-shot. I appreciate you posting it very much.
Really lovely one-shot. I appreciate you posting it very much.