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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is my second time reading this and it STILL makes me cry. TT__TT I love this story so much, the repitition is great, the way you perpertuate that one phrase... Beautiful
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beautiful story... It made me cry ;_;
It's perfectly in character, the plot is believable, and it was very well written.
Now if you'll excuse me I need to go cry in my bathroom.
It's perfectly in character, the plot is believable, and it was very well written.
Now if you'll excuse me I need to go cry in my bathroom.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked nobody move alot, cause well i really don't know why at the moment, but i do know that i liked the "nobody move". it was very sad poor naruto giving his life for the village that didn't respect him, but he loved anyway.
ja ne till next time.
ja ne till next time.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man... that was sad. but it ended very well. i love it. i'm gonna go check out some more of your work cause your style is amazing.
-innerchild
-innerchild
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!
Sad, but amazing. nice affect with Naruto's words.
truely an act of a hero.
Sad, but amazing. nice affect with Naruto's words.
truely an act of a hero.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so depressing. i am SO ready to cry. thank you for making me sad. you had very good delivery of this fic. i have a hard time finding that sometimes. but this was good. and awful. but good.~
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, it's been awhile since I read a good one of these. I loved it. Yes, you kill off a beloved character, but it had to be done or the plot wouldn't exist. Short, and too the point. Very economic use of words, and prefect pacing. Didn't drag, but didn't leave you lost in the flow.
Great piece.
Great piece.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooo!! That was too sad! -sniffles- Waaaahh!!!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. Wasn't that a tiny chunk of perfection!
Like a yummy little candy. Not too big, not too small, but so damn good while it lasts.
Primo. Refine this a zillion times (well that's what I do, lol) and cross-post it everywhere from here to like, Jupiter.
- DeeDubbya
Like a yummy little candy. Not too big, not too small, but so damn good while it lasts.
Primo. Refine this a zillion times (well that's what I do, lol) and cross-post it everywhere from here to like, Jupiter.
- DeeDubbya
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad! Lovely and amazing, but sad nonetheless. Beautiful job, really. The wording and the emotions shown were so powerful. Truely a beautiful piece.